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babygrl23
post Nov 16 2004, 09:22 PM
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The world is moving faster now,
I'm on a changing course,
But you have helped me deal with life,
You have been a stable force.

When nothing else held together,
Or made the slightest bit of sense,
You helped me restore,
My inner confidence.

Although you are in my mind,
Only and image of who I once was,
You still give me the advice,
That I would have given myself when I was still an innocent sensible little girl.

Things in my life are a constant reminder,
Of who I once was,
And although I seem different than I was before,
I am still, deep down, the little girl everyone seemed to love.
 
Br0kenxImag3
post Nov 16 2004, 10:57 PM
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Heh, It was good. I like it a lot =)

--PS--
I love your icons! {{-Was a Kerry Supporter-}}
 
babygrl23
post Nov 17 2004, 09:48 PM
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QUOTE(Br0kenxImag3 @ Nov 16 2004, 10:57 PM)
--PS--
I love your icons! {{-Was a Kerry Supporter-}}

Thanks. I still AM a Kerry supporter! Bush shouldnt have been in office the FIRST four years, which means, he shouldnt be in for the NEXT four years!
 
xcesx
post Nov 20 2004, 10:51 AM
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wow ur really talented with poetry and i see right through you as i read ur poems they really make me feel as if i know you because i feel the same exact emotions through your poetry..good job =)
 
azn_r4pf4n
post Nov 20 2004, 10:56 AM
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whoah, that poem is one of the most touchin poems i read. it shows that your guy rlly loved u.
 
babygrl23
post Nov 20 2004, 11:10 AM
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thanks happy.gif
 

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