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this letter to you
ryfitaDF
post Nov 2 2004, 12:15 AM
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i really like my girlfriend and i just needed to write down alot of thoughts about her. it's pretty long and you'll probably think it's boring, so i understand if no one leaves any comments. i just thought i'd share.


There are so many things I need to tell you
That I might have said many times before
I’m not even sure what I should think of it
That’s why I’m writing it down
Well the truth is
I really care about you more than anyone
And I think about you constantly
And I always think you’re mad at me
Cause I might be in disbelief that you ever said “yes”
And I must admit
You scare me
Because you always seem grumpy about something
And I always think that something is me
And I’m always scared that I might say something wrong
Cause I would die if you hated me
But I will say it
Do you remember how touchy I was about my star?
Now where is it? By your side for always
If you ever give it back I know I’ve f*cked up somehow
And you know how I am when you tug on my heart?
Well, maybe, soon enough I’ll let you have it
For you to hang on your necklace like so
And, I must say, the world of troubles I know disappears
When I feel you squeeze my hand
I feel like nothing would ever be so great
And all those girls I kissed over the summer
I’m sorry. I take it all back. I’m all yours now
Ever since I got your picture
I’ve had a reason to carry my wallet
And heartache is great inspiration
I hope you give my writer’s block
And I don’t care if you get mad when I say that you’re cute
Because it’s true
And when you swore sobriety for me
I couldn’t contain myself
Their might still be tears of joy on my pillow
Because I couldn’t see you in a society I hate so much
Because I can’t hate you
Because you make me so happy
I’d do almost anything to you
I’m not going to lie. There are things I won’t
But that’s honesty right there. Something that I hope you’ll give me
Because I know that I can trust you
And if I lose that trust, I won’t know what to do
And so I conclude this letter to you
And I hope you feel your hug and kiss soon
 
Ekay
post Nov 2 2004, 12:40 AM
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QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Nov 2 2004, 12:15 AM)
Ever since I got your picture
I’ve had a reason to carry my wallet

hahahaha that's the only reason? hahah anyway That'd be true for me too. Honestly I don't think it was that long. It was good and heartfelt couple spelling errors I saw but it's just spelling. I hope you and your gf will stay together. _smile.gif
 
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post Nov 2 2004, 10:13 PM
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Aww...that's so cute, Lunchbox. Jenna's very lucky. _smile.gif
 
TheSilenceInDict...
post Nov 3 2004, 05:16 PM
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It's honest.
No bullshit = good work.
 
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post Nov 4 2004, 10:57 PM
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and then he died...
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thatz really awesome
yes honesty is always the best

she is lucky.
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post Nov 5 2004, 11:41 PM
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Ah, that's awesome.
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She is lucky. happy.gif
 
RiddleMeWonders
post Nov 7 2004, 02:03 AM
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I read this and felt like I wrote it.
GREAT job.
 
PinkTrash
post Nov 7 2004, 12:47 PM
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aw great work.
too much mushy love stuffasfkasjf
 
jambaJUICE
post Nov 8 2004, 01:12 AM
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Can't have the hand without the cock.
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Awww.. you`re MUSHY !!! Hahaha.
Cute. happy.gif

Do you have a tendency to ask her, "Are you mad?"
o.0
 
ryfitaDF
post Nov 11 2004, 04:18 PM
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yes. and if i'm not asking it, i'm wondering about it.
 

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