I'm sorry my love, ... |
 Nov 2 2004, 07:26 AM
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This was suppose to be in Spanish for my homework, but here's the english version.
Those brown deep pools Are eyes of yours I could get lost If I could stare The promises you say Eyes can tell what is broken The truth unfolds The lies I bury A beauty of a rose It is emerging from the scenery This rose still undiscovered The meaning of it inside you Open your eyes Do you see it? It is love, waiting Slowly the rose darkens Painfully, the tears fall It is too late With one last dove The night covered in shadows I am sorry, my love |
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Foolish Heart I'm sorry my love Nov 2 2004, 07:26 AM
MasteRxKiD Not bad.
It'd be beautiful in Spanish.
A littl... Nov 3 2004, 05:09 PM goofipinay yea...
with one last dove
it doesnt seem to fit in... Nov 4 2004, 06:25 PM
Foolish Heart Oh Im sorry about that part, I had to make the spa... Nov 4 2004, 11:58 PM  |
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