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 Oct 21 2004, 03:46 AM
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 aiko Nakamura at your service  Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144  |
I wrote this tonight at 2 am haha. i just wrote it while i was waiting for my drunk family to come back. because i cant sleep if im alone. yea weird. anyways. it seems i dno incomplete or seomthing.
"Mannequin" I'm a mannequin Powerless; strength gone& body unrecognized I am supported by a metal stand with nothing at hand I am belittled Speechless; voice unknown& unheard I witness every motion without reaction I have no human aspects Emotionless; heart torn& no pain I don't express joy neither do i enrich in agony I'm a mannequin Powerless; no flesh& no skin I am not a human I am a mannequin |
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dreamerOi Mannequin Oct 21 2004, 03:46 AM
MasteRxKiD I like how you made the comparison of yourself to ... Oct 21 2004, 06:05 AM fairy_princess Oooh me gusta mucho! yeah 2nd stanza was aw... Oct 21 2004, 07:18 AM dreamerOi hahaa. my frieend liked that part too. hhaa Oct 22 2004, 12:11 AM ryfitaDF that's pretty clever, yo Oct 24 2004, 12:42 AM Cloud_X Very good. Oct 24 2004, 12:55 AM
dreamerOi thanks a bunch Oct 24 2004, 02:07 AM  |
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