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alone, my first post in this forum =]
*stephinika*
post Oct 20 2004, 11:43 PM
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hey...i finally decided to post here. i used to write so much poetry back in my earlier high school years...the drama of freshmen and soph year creates great inspiration, hehe. so this one is kinda old but i actually like it. enjoy. yes its one of my very FEW rhyming ones...constructive criticism please and thank you. happy.gif

//edit// i just realized this one comes after the other two poems i posted haha...so yeah just thought i'd let you all know.

Alone
by stephinika

Sadness so deep
No happiness to bear
Everlasting loneliness
Fulfillment not there
Needing more love
Yet never receiving
Answers are wanted
But none worth believing
Emptiness not spared
For the heart that is broken
The words always wanted
Are just never spoken
The beautiful feelings
Shan’t be brought out
For it could bring forth
Incredible doubt
The one who needs love
Can never obtain
For she seems to be cursed
With everlasting pain
 

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