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| *mSz_dOrk_anGeL* |
 Oct 17 2004, 04:54 PM
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Mmm I wrote it last night .. It's not good but whatever
 He tries to make me see my beauty my amazing inner soul He tries with all his might giving me all his heart, Just so I can push him away. He makes me think that I am beautiful and that I’m worth his time. But every time he tells me so I always have to say no. The more I resist the more he tries But every time, I say it’s all he says is lies. He can never know the real truth about How he makes me feel. So for now I will hide, all the things I feel inside. He will never know why I lie and why I always want to hide. All he can know is how I love him and how he makes my day. So on this note I will bid you farewell and hope he never sees The truth behind these eyes, which I never shall reveal. |
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Oct 17 2004, 04:56 PM
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 Ah, mon Dieu !  Group: Member Posts: 2,274 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,587 |
that's good! ^ ^
you wrote it last night? i give you a 
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Oct 17 2004, 05:20 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
nicely done
i like it good job |
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| *mSz_dOrk_anGeL* |
Oct 17 2004, 05:26 PM
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Thanks to both of you ^_^
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Oct 17 2004, 07:39 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
Well said.
I feel the same way as well  .and I do such, to someone special... But.. yeah you know the rest.
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