does it freak you out?, . |
 Sep 15 2004, 04:33 PM
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te quiero  Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678  |
i was wondering if it should go in the writings section, but i decided not to. if you mods feel it'd be better there... then move it.
its something that i wrote that seems to freak out some of my friends who've read it... stalker no matter what, my love, you are beautiful to me. eyes like windows to the soul, crystal as the sea no matter what you say, my love, i'll be right next to you maybe right, maybe left, maybe behind you too no matter where you run, my love, i'll be a step away i'll be right there for you, my love, until your dying day no matter how hard you push, my love, i'll stand as firm as rock i'm stronger than you think, my love, be careful.. you'll be shocked. you think you'll get rid of me? oh surely not, my love i'll stay by you forever, love.. you're my stained red, dying dove -melissa |
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[X]poised does it freak you out? Sep 15 2004, 04:33 PM
mony0407 i think its good. doesnt scare me as long as you r... Sep 15 2004, 04:48 PM AngelicEyz00 o0o, I like it!! <3 it is a bit stalker... Sep 15 2004, 04:48 PM angel-roh haha it will be scary if a guy wrote that to me ha... Sep 15 2004, 05:01 PM Mireh Its freaky. xX;
I like it though =]
[ppl mods, ... Sep 15 2004, 05:02 PM kaleidoscoped I like it, even though it's a little creepy. Sep 15 2004, 05:15 PM strwbrrykiwi23 yeah, this belongs in writing, i think...
anyways... Sep 15 2004, 05:18 PM tyedyefroggy hmmm its pretty good but instead of shocked try yo... Sep 15 2004, 05:20 PM Frankie QUOTE(mony0407 @ Sep 15 2004, 4:48 PM)i think... Sep 15 2004, 05:22 PM tweeak its not that freaky but it is really good Sep 15 2004, 05:27 PM TrannieL I dont think it's freaky but good
- Tran - Sep 15 2004, 05:32 PM Redhdchic its not really all that freaky its good.....howeve... Oct 10 2004, 09:25 PM rainnydaiis hmm very interesting.. it has a nice flow got me c... Oct 10 2004, 10:19 PM Oreo_bro as a poet (yes i know it hehe) i love it! its ... Oct 11 2004, 03:14 AM lucky_clover interesting poem, i like lol. Oct 11 2004, 10:10 AM [X]poised QUOTE(Oreo_bro @ Oct 11 2004, 3:14 AM)as a po... Oct 11 2004, 03:19 PM islandkiss oye.. that is freaky.
*shudders
but nice job. Oct 11 2004, 04:29 PM dispn0ygonekrazy good job lol nice flow too Oct 11 2004, 07:34 PM royalfreshness QUOTE(mony0407 @ Sep 15 2004, 5:48 PM)i think... Oct 11 2004, 07:39 PM PinkTrash Doesnt freak me out, as long as you meant it =l or... Oct 11 2004, 11:25 PM
[X]poised QUOTE(mony0407 @ Sep 15 2004, 4:48 PM)i think... Oct 12 2004, 03:45 PM  |
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