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 Oct 7 2004, 09:26 PM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
I'm experimenting a tad with my writing
 Our physical perception- Latitudes between Distaste Comfort- A remedy of life, Still, Firm- Too obese, or Whole- And overdone Its all too simple, Too— To me, at least Rushing In-between Latitudes with me My own personal Tummy Of blocks and puzzles To kiss with My calloused fingers- Pressuring From the finger’s tips Pressuring Latitudes Between my lips |
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Oct 7 2004, 09:31 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
hmm very interesting seems like a piece i read from robert frost =P lovely keep em comin =P
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Oct 7 2004, 09:48 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Oct 7 2004, 9:31 PM) hmm very interesting seems like a piece i read from robert frost =P lovely keep em comin =P ooo, what was the piece called?  thanks
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Oct 7 2004, 10:18 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
cant recall =P if i get it ill make sure ill post it =P i like wat u really did with it =P something way beyond the standards =P
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Oct 7 2004, 10:43 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
well =p thank =p you =p very =p much =p
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Oct 7 2004, 10:45 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
keke i love my face =P really you like it too eh =P keke =P
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Oct 7 2004, 10:49 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Love the rhythm...
It's like a Haiku on crack...err, I mean that in a good way. Ooh, Frost used to be one of my favorite poets. "As the Frost would say...Nothing gold can stay" |
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Oct 7 2004, 10:51 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
Omg i love that poem =P i found out about it because of the book the OUTSIDERS but still hes like my most favorite poet and emily dickenson both good ones
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Oct 7 2004, 10:59 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
hahahhahahhahah a haiku on crack hahah thats so me :P
my favorite poet/writer ever is oscar wilde favorite poem by frost would HAVE to be "Stopping by the woods on a snowy evening".. i had to recite that in 8th grade ohhhhh and walt whitman!  <3
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Oct 7 2004, 11:01 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
omg the road not taken is good and snowy evening is one of my favorites =P i had to research why he wrote it and such
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Oct 7 2004, 11:03 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
ah hah i forgot about the road not taken...that poem really inspired me to start writing, it's like an excellent piece
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Oct 8 2004, 02:11 AM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
My favorite poet is Steve Abee.
LoL, he was my kinda my mentor aside from being a teacher, as well as lead the Writer's Club I'm so fond of. He published two books that I know of, and they're just awesome. QUOTE hahahhahahhahah a haiku on crack hahah thats so me :P I'm glad that I hit the nail right on the head with that one. |
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