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post Oct 7 2004, 02:42 AM
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Heres a few of my poems i have gathered up, a few have been posted on some sites, but my best is treasures in you, which was posted on a real poetry site but i have lost the link seeing as it was on my old comp. Anyways, yeah im a guy and i write poetry but its what i do and u girls better not think im lame!

-=Random Crap thing=-
You told me that you loved me so,
Was it all a lie to make me go,
To that place i never wanted to see,
Why did you do this,
why to me?

-=Confused=-
Love is such a special thing,
It lifts people up and gives them wings,
When will i experiance, love like this?
Will it be in a hug or my very first kiss?

Who is the girl that is ment for me,
Do i know her? does she know me?
I do so much searching, only to find
that im back at the place i started in my mind.

Why cant things happen the way i want,
Why must i go through these daily taunts
a few close friends, a few i just met
so many girls, how can i forget?

Im just a guy, lost and confused
My heart has been broken, much like a fuse
tell me the reasond, tell me why,
you made me love you, why why why

All i want to know, is how it will come
by day? by night? by phone call? by drum?
how will i find, that special one for me,
how do i know..who the right one will be.

-=Loved ones=-
How many times a day,
do we sit down and chat,
with our family and loved ones,
not bicker and spat,

How many times,
do we show our love,
for the one given to us,
by the Lord God above,

dont forget to show,
your appreciation and care,
for one of these days,
that loved one wont be their.

-=Is it wise to say I love you on April Fools Day=-
I ask you this, to all of you out their,
to those that are reading,
and those that care,
would it be wise,
on this foolish day,
to tell that special some one
how they make you feel every day?

Would they accept it,
or take it as a joke,
what would you do,
would u begin to choke?
Your eyes swelling with tears,
as they laugh laugh away,
is it smart to say i love you,
on april fools day.

-=Change=-
Changing is normal,
part of every persons life,
Boys become husbands,
and girls become wives,

Our moods change as well,
from happy to sad,
we experiance things that bring us joy,
and also things that are bad,

A human is forever changing,
in fitness and in mind,
with each birth brings life,
but our lives grow short with time,

I can feel myself changing,
for better or for worse,
some day i'll find the answer,
and live with my curse.

-=Treasures In You=-

There are treasures in life,
but owners are few
Of money and power
to buy things brand new.
Yet you can be wealthy
and feel regal too,
If you will just look
for the treasures in you.
These treasures in life
are not hard to find
When you look in your heart,
your soul, and your mind.
For when you are willing
to share what's within,
Your fervent search
for riches will end.
The joy and the laughter,
the smile that you bring;
The heart unafraid
to love and to sing;
The hand always willing
to help those in need;
Ones quick to reach out,
to labor and feed.
So thank you for sharing
these great gifts inside;
The caring, the cheering,
the hug when one cried.
Thanks for the energy,
encouragement too,
And thank you for sharing
the treasures in you.


Treasure in u is my best by far. anyways im tired, later
 
TheSilenceInDict...
post Oct 7 2004, 03:58 AM
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QUOTE
Anyways, yeah im a guy and i write poetry but its what i do and u girls better not think im lame!


I'm a guy, and as many of the writers here are, it's what I do as well. I do readings for arts festivals, have contributed to a few poetry books, etc etc. It's good to have a new addition to the usual writing posters.

Welcome. biggrin.gif

And, BTW, the girls definitely won't think you're lame. Especially considering the fact that the guys won't.
 
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post Oct 7 2004, 10:08 AM
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youre right, the last one is the best...i really like it...keep writing and posting! wink.gif
 
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post Oct 7 2004, 05:35 PM
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yep i think last is best and keep writing we all have a lot of potential =P
 
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post Oct 7 2004, 06:27 PM
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QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Oct 7 2004, 5:35 PM)
yep i think last is best and keep writing we all have a lot of potential =P

yeah and u sure want a "treasure" of ur own huh? huh.gif
happy.gif happy.gif hope u find that chick ur looking for

bye buddy
 
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post Oct 7 2004, 07:04 PM
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QUOTE(jambaJUICE @ Oct 7 2004, 6:27 PM)
yeah and u sure want a "treasure" of ur own huh? huh.gif
happy.gif happy.gif hope u find that chick ur looking for

bye buddy

awww ^_^
 
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post Oct 7 2004, 07:25 PM
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I like them too... Good job Oreo... Heh...

*wanders around*

Good luck with that girl too... Heh... I think you have endured enough of being the 'good' guy... I know how that feels...
 
Oreo_bro
post Oct 25 2004, 01:33 AM
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just wrote..

My mask, its peaceful, with a smile painted on,
It helps me belive all my scars are gone
all the emotional pain that i have felt in my life,
are now gone when i put on the mascarade for my life.

I smile for people, knowing in my heart i frown,
I laugh for my friends, even though im feeling down,
I listen to those who need it, when my own heart wants to talk
I feel so alone, so down in my walk

I put on my mask, every day,
it hides my scares, my pain, im afriad,
that someday my friends, whom i thought i could trust,
would look down and frown apon me with disgust,
My mask, so peaceful, so open, so right,
would no longer hide, my pain and my fright.
 
dreamerOi
post Oct 25 2004, 01:39 AM
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i like the last one& the mask one the best. _smile.gif . look at all those compliments haha. now arent you glad i recomended you here?
 
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post Oct 25 2004, 02:26 AM
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QUOTE(dreamerOi @ Oct 24 2004, 10:39 PM)
i like the last one& the mask one the best. _smile.gif . look at all those compliments haha. now arent you glad i recomended you here?

yes i am sweetie happy.gif
 
Ekay
post Oct 25 2004, 06:01 PM
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Let me say this first off. There's nothing wrong with a guy writing poetry. I'm a guy. But anyways, yeah, I do think that Treasures in You is your best so far. The Mask is good too, seems like somethin` I do whenever I'm feelin` down.
 

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