crap poem, blah Options

[jambaJUICE]

a light shone brightly across midnight`s death
bury me deep, i cried.
looking above, a muffled cry of anguish runs chills down my spine.
pricks my neck as a shadow casts over me
circling my hope and laughter, gazing fire down upon me
i run feeling it`s eyes whisper hate into my blood..
poisoning my veins, extracting my joy.
with one quick sweep i fall helplessly.
blinded in moments.

but with you.
with the hold of you.
im indestructable

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Blegh. that sucked arse.
oh wells, first post thingy majiggy for me.