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a poem i wrote in the 8th grade (part 3).
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post Oct 1 2004, 06:15 AM
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One of my other poems from Writers Club...This one I don't like much, But when I read it aloud to Mel, she said she liked it. I really only like the title, LoL.
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Part 1
Part 2

Dissipating Reality

Burning beating
with the shots of cold pain.
Soulless thoughts,
thoughtless soul,
Demonic rage,
Spin and burst.
F*ck the f*cker,
Light the fire,
Burn the ashes.
My mind my rage,
My rage my soul.
Drown on air,
Live in the shadows of the stars,
Die in the light of your moon.

Dissipating reality,
Jump - and hang on...
Knife sharp speed,
Jumps on air.
Fear of courage,
Pleasure of pain,
Happiness of grief,
The life in death,
Dissipating reality,
Jump - and fall...

The Ashes of Writers Club
 

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