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dispn0ygonekrazy
post Sep 28 2004, 10:08 PM
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i wrote this for my ex right now i dont give a care about any writing guidelines critisism say whatever u want i rhymed this one iight

no matter how hard i tried to get u back
i gotta give it up and get back on track
the times with you id never forget
every last moment that id never regret
only that time when everything fell
where it went in chaos and sent us through hell
just a phone call away i heard ur voice
i choked up on my words and i didnt have a choice
i was so scared i couldnt say sorry to you
out of so many chances it didnt go through
the songs u played while we were on the phone
i cried so hard and realized that im on my own
now im gonna go away and out of your sight
so it can go back to the way when everything was right
im sorry i couldnt say these simple words to you
but only to hope that youd keep your head up and make it through

im like going goodbye here yall im like so f*cked up right now
 

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dispn0ygonekrazy   im depressed   Sep 28 2004, 10:08 PM
rainnydaiis   nice poem... wat happened...   Sep 28 2004, 10:10 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   i just gave up on everything man...im thinking of ...   Sep 28 2004, 10:13 PM
rainnydaiis   u quit i will hunt you!!   Sep 28 2004, 10:14 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   right now man i dont noe what to do..ive thought o...   Sep 28 2004, 10:15 PM
rainnydaiis   if you quit imma quit   Sep 28 2004, 10:48 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   well man u dont needa quit if i quit i already cam...   Sep 29 2004, 08:39 AM
rainnydaiis   u bastard... =P   Sep 29 2004, 08:40 AM
dispn0ygonekrazy   bastard lol well sam dooooode well shiet man u lik...   Sep 29 2004, 09:00 AM
rainnydaiis   your seriously leaving... man alright then.. cya a...   Sep 29 2004, 09:03 AM
dispn0ygonekrazy   later   Sep 29 2004, 09:09 AM
rainnydaiis   aiitez you better stay we need more writers in CB....   Sep 29 2004, 09:11 AM
dispn0ygonekrazy   theres plenty of good writers here yall dont need ...   Sep 29 2004, 09:14 AM
omg_melface   You're so emo... why are you going to kill yo...   Sep 29 2004, 12:07 PM
rainnydaiis   ahhh u made mel mad... just stay mike girls are so...   Sep 29 2004, 06:29 PM
Devastation   eh, cheer up fellow poetry writer. Girls arent eve...   Sep 29 2004, 07:10 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   i guess your right mel im some stupid emo guy with...   Sep 29 2004, 07:34 PM
omg_melface   I wasn't that serious about the no clue depres...   Sep 29 2004, 07:44 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   im sorry im just being an ass right now i dont mea...   Sep 29 2004, 07:46 PM
omg_melface   okay, have fun... and i still think you're an...   Sep 29 2004, 07:48 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   hehe i know well yall take care iight ill miss yal...   Sep 29 2004, 07:50 PM
LoserLuvS   QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Sep 28 2004, 10:08 P...   Sep 29 2004, 09:48 PM
rainnydaiis   you didn't even say bye to me you are an ass...   Sep 30 2004, 12:11 AM
faithin_felix   aww so sweet, really nice poem so talented. for a ...   Sep 30 2004, 12:50 AM
MasteRxKiD   You're just blinded right now, Mike. All your...   Sep 30 2004, 02:14 AM
dispn0ygonekrazy   well mel said dont give any umm goodbyes but yeh a...   Sep 30 2004, 09:33 AM
omg_melface   he didn't even say how long he's going to ...   Sep 30 2004, 02:08 PM
j x tEARz   I'll tell you this. The most biggest mistake t...   Sep 30 2004, 02:15 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   QUOTEhe didn't even say how long he's goin...   Sep 30 2004, 07:10 PM
ichiban   It's a good poem. But calm down a bit ... it...   Sep 30 2004, 11:47 PM
Cloud_X   She has a point...don't go stressin' over ...   Sep 30 2004, 11:55 PM


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