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You say you love me
Rachel
post Sep 27 2004, 07:10 PM
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You say you love me,
but I know you don’t.
You say you care,
but I know you’re lying.
You say you want to be with me,
but I know you’re kidding.

I do want to believe you
I really do,
But I can’t get hurt again
So please, please
Stop trying to mess with my head
And my heart.
 
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Sep 27 2004, 07:19 PM
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hey that was sooooo awesome cry.gif cry.gif i can relate to that and its great no rhyming word for word and makes perfect sens good job no excellent
 
Rachel
post Sep 27 2004, 08:36 PM
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haha thanks...

this is a way old poem....i wrote it like last year or 2 years ago but i can still relate =)
 
*wind&fire*
post Sep 27 2004, 08:38 PM
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awwww. thats so sad....i hope they didnt hurt u to bad.....
 
rainnydaiis
post Sep 28 2004, 08:50 AM
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i love this poem keep writing =P
 
Rachel
post Sep 28 2004, 06:18 PM
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thanks =)

i will post some of my old stuff up...i have been lacking inspiration =X
 
rainnydaiis
post Sep 28 2004, 09:55 PM
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