Down the Road, Please leave comments |
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 Sep 15 2004, 08:55 PM
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 babygrl23  Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911  |
When the road ahead looks dark and scary,
Do not fear, for the only thing to fear is fear itself, And I will be by your side the whole way. Do not fear that I will leave you stranded, Alone and confused, As others did to me. I will follow you on the path of life, And guide you as much as I can, For I am your friend. When we turn to each other and laugh, Laugh for no reason, You KNOW that I am your friend. We may have differences, But, "do not doubt our friendship," as you said to me, I will always be here. When the road ahead looks dark and scary, And we are lost and don't know what to do, Let's just turn to each other, laugh and smile, that's all we have to do. We will go through everything together, We will survive, No matter what may lie ahead! |
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Sep 16 2004, 05:28 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
ok, I know this is spamming...but come on! Somebody must have SOME comments.
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Sep 16 2004, 05:30 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
I like your topic friendship and just wait people will get to it sooner or later =P
my poems have no comments ad all and i don't mind =P |
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Sep 16 2004, 06:23 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 16 2004, 5:30 PM) I like your topic friendship and just wait people will get to it sooner or later =P my poems have no comments ad all and i don't mind =P thank you! |
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Sep 16 2004, 06:24 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
no Problemo =P
i love people who write i find it sexy lolz! |
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Sep 16 2004, 07:52 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 16 2004, 6:24 PM) no Problemo =P i love people who write i find it sexy lolz! lol |
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Sep 17 2004, 01:27 PM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
it's pretty good...i dont like the repetativeness, flow, or word choice
 but the topic is pretty compassionate and that makes it interesting on it's own
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Sep 25 2004, 12:53 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
O.K., thanks.
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Sep 25 2004, 01:10 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
aww looks like im a little late lol good poem!!!!
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Sep 26 2004, 08:36 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
Thanks! =)
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