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post Sep 25 2004, 10:30 PM
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Hrm, I really want to start seeing Sam (rainydaiis) and Mike (dispn0ygonekrazy) start posting some work that doesn't have to do with love.

I'm getting a little tired of seeing the same things over and over... _dry.gif

Try writing with some different inspiration and see how that turns out. You won't know your capabilities without working your way outside of what you're used to, especially if it's along the lines of utilizing the same topic over and over.

Again, it's self-expression and of course completely your choice. It's great you guys are able and willing to open up with your emotions about such a sensitive subject. All I'm suggesting is that maybe challenging yourself to write on different things will help you grow as a writer, and help you further express yourself to the fullest, especially when it comes to an all too common subject such as love.

Good work so far...Any other suggestions/advice/help you guys need, just ask.

-Joe.
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 01:11 AM
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lol very very funnnnny!!
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 10:21 AM
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writing ROYALITY =P or writing pwnage =P
Master - Master
Melface- Masters Wife
Mike- Masters consultatant
Sam- Masters Jester... LOLz
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 11:16 AM
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you two are so strange... _unsure.gif


Oh, sweetie... you forgot to tell them that not all poems are supposed to rhyme.
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 11:29 AM
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im just special =P
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 01:22 PM
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QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 26 2004, 1:09 AM)
the next door neighbors better bring some ear muffons because theirs gonna be something goin on =P

Trust me, they're going to need more than ear muffs to drown out what's going to be going on, LoL. laugh.gif

Oh, and yeah, you're right, Mel...

Just keep in mind that all poems don't have to rhyme.
In my opinion, they come out much better.
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 03:13 PM
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HUH WHY AM I A CONSULTANT?!?!?!!?!? whats my purpose anywayz lol
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 05:02 PM
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What's this noise you boys are talking about? EH? huh.gif [puts hands on hips] Hmph?!
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 05:03 PM
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lol mel hmmm what is the noise lol i think we all know what it is =P
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 05:14 PM
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Noise coming from whom?
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 05:55 PM
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I like the love poems...why would someone really wanna read about death....thas sooo depressing...write more love poems...... :)
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 05:58 PM
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QUOTE(happygoluckyng @ Sep 26 2004, 4:55 PM)
I like the love poems...why would someone really wanna read about death....thas sooo depressing...write more love poems...... :)

what are you talking about? .... jesus christ....Girl, just hush, leave it to the master.



Sam.. mike... you don't have to write about death to stay away from writing about love... there are other things besides love and death
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 06:05 PM
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lol i know im going on a variety of things right now im working on a story AND YEAH MASTA JOE THNX ALOT I GOT AN A on my essay the other day WOOT WOOT!! lol for once im following the regulations and guidelines of essays if i like ever need help ima go straight to u THNX AGAIN MASTA
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 10:02 PM
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wahhh theres sex =P
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 01:20 AM
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QUOTE(happygoluckyng @ Sep 26 2004, 5:55 PM)
I like the love poems...why would someone really wanna read about death....thas sooo depressing...write more love poems...... :)

I never said anything about only writing about Death. They choose what they want to write. I just made the point that they should open up their options when it comes to writing.

I'm sure you don't want to read 'depressing' work, but honestly, not everything can be about bunnies and flowers. Sorry to be harsh, but, I believe the best writing is the one that reflects the authors inner most emotions, life experiences and views on life. This makes it even easier for an audience to relate and highly appreciate their work . Many people have had their lives changed over pen on paper, emotions translated into words. Why? Because of ideals, struggle, self-conflict and discovery, and truth.

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lol i know im going on a variety of things right now im working on a story AND YEAH MASTA JOE THNX ALOT I GOT AN A on my essay the other day WOOT WOOT!! lol for once im following the regulations and guidelines of essays if i like ever need help ima go straight to u THNX AGAIN MASTA


I'm glad that I made that much of a difference. By all means, you can turn to me for help when it comes to writing. I actually love writing essays for school too, which is pretty pathetic, but I see it as challenges - for myself as a writer. At least that's what gets me through them.
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:21 AM
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happy.gif interesting thread...
*puts on party hat* tongue.gif

i dont mind alot of love poems, there are so many things to express about love...there is also love in death...just do it in an original unique and expressive way....no more adolescent/teen/preteen oh im going to kill myself and my bf sucks oh yeah my parents do too "I WANT THIS CHICK SO BAD BUT SHE THINKS IM UGLY AND STUPID BECAUSE...IAM!" crap...
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:34 AM
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QUOTE(Heathasm @ Sep 27 2004, 7:21 AM)
happy.gif interesting thread...
*puts on party hat* tongue.gif

i dont mind alot of love poems, there are so many things to express about love...there is also love in death...just do it in an original unique and expressive way....no more adolescent/teen/preteen oh im going to kill myself and my bf sucks oh yeah my parents do too "I WANT THIS CHICK SO BAD BUT SHE THINKS IM UGLY AND STUPID BECAUSE...IAM!" crap...

Have you read most of the love poems here at cB? laugh.gif
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:37 AM
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QUOTE(omg_melface @ Sep 27 2004, 8:34 AM)
Have you read most of the love poems here at cB? laugh.gif

lol...not really
im going to start reading more of the poems here though, i kind of just descovered the section tongue.gif
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:51 AM
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AHHH!!!! i must write poems about life now =P bwahahhahahaha

and whens the honeymoon guys? ill see you guys off
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:51 AM
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QUOTE(Heathasm @ Sep 27 2004, 7:37 AM)
lol...not really
im going to start reading more of the poems here though, i kind of just descovered the section tongue.gif

Not many have discovered this part of cB... that just might be a good thing considering the fact that most cB members can't even spell simple words of the english language correctly... Sad thing is, they do that on purpose. stubborn.gif
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:52 AM
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^ so harsh T.T i can spell... or i think i can =P

anyways no one actually comes to this section... when i found out there was a writing section i was like when was this here.. sucks T.T
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:55 AM
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lol i didnt discover the writing section untill awhile ago so far ive been here most of the time and yeah when is the honeymoon mel if it does happen have fun dont forget to provide the ear muffs XD
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:56 AM
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they dont need ear muffs the neighbors need to move rooms about 4 rooms away =P lolz anyways i found this out just browsing through the sections i was like interest? and yeah writing was in there
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:58 AM
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Haha... you two guys are just so silly...
I'm not sure exactly.... but...


Okay, it's going to be the week of March 28th, 2005... we're leaving for Japan together at 5:26am from Los Angeles...

but... i'm not sure exactly... rolleyes.gif




off topic: err this has been bothering me.. IT'S MASTER... mastER KTHXbye.
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 08:59 AM
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JAPAN? that aint romantic... its gonna be so crowded..but ur choice i would go to thaite... a paradise resort somewhere in the thailands... its so nice =P their you can have MUCHO FUN!!

MUCHO FUN rolleyes.gif
 
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QUOTE(omg_melface @ Sep 27 2004, 8:51 AM)
Not many have discovered this part of cB... that just might be a good thing considering the fact that most cB members can't even spell simple words of the english language correctly... Sad thing is, they do that on purpose. stubborn.gif

i know alot of words
but i dont know how to spell them laugh.gif
that is why it is not a bad thing to re-read what you've written¬.¬
 

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