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 Sep 22 2004, 10:39 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
i just wrote this about my friend's sister who is seriously the most negative person in the entire world. she's a black hole on legs, man.no rhyming or anything, just plain disgust.
UNIVERSAL ANTAGONIST I have a question Why, the f*ck, are you so negative? Was it some childhood trauma? Is it cause you just want to hate people cause it’s the cool thing to do? Is it cause you have nothing better to do? I’ll believe that, you waste of life. Learn some f*cking respect for people Especially those trying their damnedest to make life less sh*tty Trying to lighten the mood only makes you more, oh, f**kin hostile Whatever. Choke on a d*ck. You are a black hole Trying to destroy everything you know You hate everyone for all the wrong reasons Unless their’s a better explaination for your sh*tty attitude You are the antagonist Of everything that lives and breathes I never believed in vampires Till the night that I met you So you say I’m disgusting? Make it personal. Ok I can take being disliked, but talking sh*t won’t cut it I try to be polite to you no matter what Te least you could do is shut the f*ck up about it Instead of looking at me like I’m wasted potential Atleast I have a conscience and more than 2 friends to talk to You’ll just keep bringing everyone down Till they decide to crush you. Cause you’re a black hole Lay yourself to rest Seriously, though Destroy yourself and see who gives a f*ck I can count them and keep a tight fist You antagonize anything you can think of So please limit your horizons By means of death, preferably Look up any derogatory word And I’ll learn a thing or two about you Cause you’re a black hole Sucking in every last ounce of pride Anyone you come in contact with once had Was your mother pregnant or constipated? Unfortunately, you’ll live another day Wasting food and air that Decent humans could use for the better. you are the negative space in this masterpiece called life we need to replace you with somthing beautiful |
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Sep 22 2004, 10:40 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
very dark..... and interesting
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Sep 23 2004, 05:02 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Whoa, that's good. =]
Nice job, I really like it. I almost fall under that category, though, heh. I'm an extremely negative person in real-life as opposed to internet. >__> But I really like it, nice job. =-] |
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Sep 25 2004, 10:27 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
thanks, you 2.
more people should tell me how good or bad it is. 
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