the eff'd up things.., sry |
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 Sep 22 2004, 03:30 PM
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SOS Brigade!!  Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775  |
deleted this poem...
masterxkid sry about it |
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Sep 22 2004, 08:46 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Hrm, I don't really like it.
I see what you're doing with it though. Try doing it again, But just writing, nonstop...Don't think, just let it all out for about 2 minutes...You'll surprised when you stop and read what you just wrote. If it's not a poem, Is it just coincidence that it rhymes? Again, I like where you were going with it, Just not where it went. |
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Sep 22 2004, 08:47 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
im just weird.. i tend to rhyme mostly everything i write... be it poetry or story?
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