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poem i wrote, sorry its untitled ;x
Caitlin
post Sep 16 2004, 12:30 PM
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This is just a poem I wrote thats about one of my really close guy friends. I like him alot but I cant tell him how I feel. Heres the poem

That Special Someone

He makes me smile almost everyday
But i`m afraid he dosent feel the same way
I think I like him, not sure if this is real
I cant even explain how I feel
When he looks in my eyes, I can feel my heart melt
But there are these indescribeable feelings, the ones I have felt
He is the only boy that makes me feel this way
Its not even hard to find the words to say
For once I can be myself and not pretend
Maybe it would be better, if i was just his friend
I think he likes her, they all say that its true
But I cant help myself, Im falling for you
Basically I want to know how you feel
And if this could ever be real
When im around you, my smile is genuine and true
its never been like that, until I met you
I dont think i`ll ever tell you, so this you will never know
Unless I ever find the courage, to let how i feel show

Please tell me what you think of it =]
 
rainnydaiis
post Sep 16 2004, 01:38 PM
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wow very nice =P enjoyed it too the fullest =P
 
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post Sep 16 2004, 01:51 PM
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aww thanks so much =]
 
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post Sep 16 2004, 01:53 PM
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No problem
 
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post Sep 16 2004, 03:24 PM
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Why don't you title it "The Special Someone"
 
Caitlin
post Sep 16 2004, 04:36 PM
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aww thats so wonderful =) i love that idea,
thank you so much
okay so now the new title is that special someone !
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post Sep 16 2004, 04:36 PM
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haha no problem
 

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