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 Aug 29 2004, 12:15 AM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
Before darkness finds quite places in the maria of the moon
Vermilion lips accompany the lyre before the darkened glooms As Maria sings in waning, empty, tarnished tunes; Then darkness falls-she forgets her flaws, as Maria of the moon This is a really short poem i wrote a while back that i like alot :) Hope you enjoy it...tips are appreciated |
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Aug 31 2004, 02:11 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
wow thats one strongest feelings and description there!! and i like the title to this too^___^ great job!^___^ ur good at writing poems, huh? that's good^^ i wish i was good at writing poems haha
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Aug 31 2004, 08:07 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
QUOTE(anqel_r0h @ Aug 31 2004, 2:11 PM) wow thats one strongest feelings and description there!! and i like the title to this too^___^ great job!^___^ ur good at writing poems, huh? that's good^^ i wish i was good at writing poems haha hehe thank you  i love to write
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Sep 2 2004, 01:47 AM
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 Createblogger Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,029 |
beautiful. just beautiful.
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Sep 2 2004, 02:54 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
amazing. pure genious;
it takes talent to write that kinda stuff
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Sep 2 2004, 06:53 AM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
wow thanks
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