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poems give UR poems, they cant be copied or pasted
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post Aug 31 2004, 12:51 AM
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ok i got three of em plz comment i want to know...

My love for you
by sam son

i am the soil and u r the rose
my love for you continuely grows
Theres nothing in this world money can buy
to show you how much i love you inside
i am me and u r the breeze
u wash over me and time will freeze
It's your voice that i hear
that washes away my fear
ur always there to comfort me
to love and peace ur the key
wherever u r
im the brain and ur the heart
i know were never to far apart.


The way i feel
by sam son

i feel so full now that you are here
my missing piece is found and i have nothing to fear
cuz i know that when im having trouble i can go to you
cuz ur my one and only true love and i know this is true
cuz when ur with me i feel so different and strange
i am beyond the world and universe im beyond range
and in that world its only you and me
watching the sun go down behind the sea
this love is sent from above
its called unconditional love
its when ur loving for that person never changes
nothing can stop it not even fools and sages
cuz love is the strongest thing it over powers all
nothing can make this feelings fall
this love i KNOW it is real
this is the way that i feel

these days.... im sorry i cant be there...
by sam son

all the people i talk to say that time goes by fast
but for me it goes so slow i dont think i'll last
cuz a hour without seeing u is like a weak
i think if i dont see u anuther day i'll freak
the pain hurts so much i want to break and tear
the pain inside me is too much to bear!
I ONLY WISH I CAN BE WITH YOU
to see you! feel you! hug you! and touch you
i reach out but i only grab a handful of air
i wish i can show you how much i care
i dream and think of you all day and night
u r right there but when i try to hold u ur out of sight
i bite and sigh to myself and cry
every second is hell i wanna die
i love you so much ill do anything
to get ur happiness ill do everything
life's gay... i wanna show u how much i care...
these days... im sorry i cant be there...


feel free to comment i made alot of songs too but they are too long to post -_- i like writing... as u can see...
 
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post Aug 31 2004, 12:56 AM
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o0o.. cool, they rhyme =]

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post Aug 31 2004, 01:04 AM
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lol tahts good...
do they haf to be ritten by ourselves or can we post poems that are iunno very inspirational ect??
 
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post Aug 31 2004, 01:09 AM
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post if u think its good
 
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post Sep 1 2004, 11:53 AM
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they're good. so cute. hehe happy.gif
 
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post Sep 1 2004, 01:37 PM
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oo ur poems r soo good... hehe.gif
 

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