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my poem
chellibabe124
post Aug 17 2004, 07:14 PM
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read this poem that i wrote and tell me if it is good or even if it makes sense wink.gif

my heart is missing so much,
some of which i cannot find,
but seeing what is lost,
turns my heart blind..
what goes from a glance in the mirror,
turns into a stare,
looking deep inside this pain,
wondering if its caution or despair..
questioning my feelings in relationships,
why they quickly end,
was my heart ever broken?
or is it taking a lifetime to mend?..

thanks!
 

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chellibabe124   my poem   Aug 17 2004, 07:14 PM
IIO__oII   someone move it to writing.. and its good. :]   Aug 17 2004, 07:15 PM
xjjajeengx   its good. moved.   Aug 17 2004, 07:16 PM
MyVermilionPlague   Nice poem. =-]   Aug 17 2004, 07:17 PM
sup3rgirl7   mm gewd poem props lol   Aug 17 2004, 07:21 PM
Devastation   this poem deserves to be published.   Aug 17 2004, 07:46 PM
chellibabe124   aww you guys make me feel speshul   Aug 17 2004, 07:56 PM
F1R3B4T   i agree this poem is realli gud i like it u shud e...   Aug 18 2004, 02:53 AM
me_myself_andi2003   love ur poem... did u just break up? the poem is l...   Aug 21 2004, 02:11 AM


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