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 Aug 17 2004, 07:14 PM
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 cookie?...  Group: Member Posts: 107 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,080  |
read this poem that i wrote and tell me if it is good or even if it makes sense
 my heart is missing so much, some of which i cannot find, but seeing what is lost, turns my heart blind.. what goes from a glance in the mirror, turns into a stare, looking deep inside this pain, wondering if its caution or despair.. questioning my feelings in relationships, why they quickly end, was my heart ever broken? or is it taking a lifetime to mend?.. thanks! |
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Aug 17 2004, 07:15 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,412 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,012 |
someone move it to writing..
and its good. :] |
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Aug 17 2004, 07:16 PM
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 advanced newbie... S2 Group: Member Posts: 3,504 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 752 |
its good.
 moved.
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Aug 17 2004, 07:17 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Nice poem. =-]
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Aug 17 2004, 07:21 PM
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 eww boys have Co0tiES :P Group: Member Posts: 48 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,575 |
mm gewd poem props lol
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Aug 17 2004, 07:46 PM
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 who again? Group: Member Posts: 555 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,458 |
this poem deserves to be published.
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Aug 17 2004, 07:56 PM
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cookie?... Group: Member Posts: 107 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,080 |
aww you guys make me feel speshul
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Aug 18 2004, 02:53 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
i agree this poem is realli gud i like it
u shud extend it n make it longer ya kno? |
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Aug 21 2004, 02:11 AM
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 im making a come back! woohoo Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,819 |
love ur poem... did u just break up? the poem is like.... sad
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