Love Lost Down The Barrel (poem by me) |
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 Aug 15 2004, 01:16 AM
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 Newbie  Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,633  |
hey,
My Name is John and I thought I would share one of my newest poems with you cause I'm really bored and its 2a.m...haha  [love lost down the barrel] Aim your gun, right at my heart. Pull the trigger, And fire at will. Put a bullet in me, destroy all the memories, we ever had, with each other. Fall to the ground, face down on the floor. I'm not dead, Nor alive, confusion is here. How could words slit wrists? And love kill? Maybe I'm just crazy, Crazy enough to die for you. The love lost while looking down, the barrel of a gun. |
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Aug 15 2004, 09:18 AM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
I like this poem. It's how I feel a lot of the time in my relationship. It's very true about a lot of things. I think you're a very talented writer.
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Aug 15 2004, 12:14 PM
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 Your love is a razorblade kiss ♥ Group: Member Posts: 1,794 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 9,959 |
i lyk it... evn tho itz a lil scary. but i hav those feelingz too!
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Aug 16 2004, 04:26 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
deep + depressing
realli nice! hup yup |
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Aug 16 2004, 05:38 AM
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 and they say imitation is flattering Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
Unfortunately no one ever survives "the barrel" to write a poem of their memories :P
Very..... ouch. But yeah. I just wrote a story somewhat like this. |
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