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Summer nights
Devastation
post Aug 11 2004, 11:09 AM
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who again?
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its a new type of poem, i've been learning from my friends teacher. hope ya like it.



the cool breeze, the cool waters,
whats a time out in the summer night

the moon shining so bright
would love to spend a day out in this summer night

a night with friends, joy, laughter
all on a summer night

a time to get close, hug, and kiss
with a memory of a summer night

spend it with a friend, loveone, or yourself
as long as it is on a summernight

stare at the moon, count the stars
layin on the grass on a summernight

why so down? make a wish, cheer up
its a summer's night.
 
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post Aug 11 2004, 11:38 AM
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me lyk dat happy.gif
 
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post Aug 11 2004, 12:14 PM
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lol thats great
 
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post Aug 11 2004, 12:16 PM
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¢¾ Wanting it. ¢¾
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it nyceee
 
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post Aug 13 2004, 10:29 PM
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Yay, Andrew!
You just keep on writing poems! That is SO awesome.. seriously. I think guys should start writing more poetry. :P

=-] I like this one a lot, Andrew. Great job. wub.gif
 

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