the bane of our nation, i'm getting political and stuff |
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 Aug 10 2004, 05:03 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
sooooo many things telling me about how bad bush is. why not do somthign about it? what do i do best? i wrote an anti-bush song! it's EFFin OI! if you don't like it that's fine and if you do like it be sure to tell me!
 ! here it is.BANE OF OUR NATION So many people dying for no reason So many politics committing treason So many dollars taken away from the needy For heat seeking missiles: exterminate machinery Commander in chief took Iraq under fire We’re told it’s for freedom, we know for empire Sacrifice our future for a non-existant gain The senior: the warlock, the offspring: the bane So many people dying for no reason So many politics committing treason So many dollars taken away from the needy For heat seeking missiles: exterminate machinery So many children still being left behind So many workingmen being robbed blind So many bullets producing such fear So tell me who is the real terrorist here? Election speech lies and denying the truth Now he’s attempting to burgle our youth The first step to becoming totalitarian Is not reading but signing the patriot act “Despicable acts of terror”? Despicable errors! Recruiting the people by using their prayers G dubya: warmonger. He’s ready to kill And like Herbert Hoover we’re building bushvilles So many soldiers that aren’t coming back To bring liberty to the country Iraq So much for building a democracy When all that we’re after is sweet Texas tea We know that Iraq has some WMDs What’s there left to prove? We have the receipt I guess offensive is how we defend Just so al-Quida can do it again Too many people dying for no reason Too many politics committing treason Too many dollars not being used for feeding Too many dollars in the pockets of the greedy Too much potential dead on the front line Too many workingmen being robbed blind Too many corpses and too many coffins George W. Bush GET THE F*** OUT OF OFFICE! |
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Aug 10 2004, 10:13 PM
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 ÖÐÎÄÈí¼þ Group: Member Posts: 2,072 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,655 |
That's just awesome, and very true of what's going on right now. I really like the last line
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Aug 11 2004, 02:13 AM
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last line BOMBS.
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Aug 11 2004, 02:14 AM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE(F1R3B4T @ Aug 11 2004, 2:13 AM) last line BOMBS. come again? |
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Aug 12 2004, 03:40 AM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
more people read me!
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Aug 12 2004, 07:49 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
*crying* Everytime I think I'm getting better at writing, you blow me away so utterly and completely. You are such an amazing writer. *sniffles*
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Aug 12 2004, 08:30 PM
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Actually the rhymes reach way too far, and half of them make half-assed sense just to rhyme, for example:
QUOTE Too many dollars not being used for feeding
Too many dollars in the pockets of the greedy |
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Aug 12 2004, 11:42 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE(CrackedRearView @ Aug 12 2004, 8:30 PM) Actually the rhymes reach way too far, and half of them make half-assed sense just to rhyme, for example: i know. i didn't like that one very much, but i wanted to switch the chorus up a little bit. QUOTE *crying* Everytime I think I'm getting better at writing, you blow me away so utterly and completely. You are such an amazing writer. *sniffles* don't even worry! you're doing great! and you are getting better. just chill i forgot to say anything about him hating homosexuals and him trying to forbay abortions. oh well. |
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Aug 13 2004, 12:10 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 646 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,847 |
very awesome ^_^
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Aug 14 2004, 10:35 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
i think it's ok... hehe i mean i hate bush too........ and wow john...u wana be famous someday, huh? dammn a music director should read ur lyrics cause it's reallie good^^;; hmm i never hear u sing tho... oo have u ever record any of ur songs yet that ppls can hear too?^^
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Aug 14 2004, 10:41 AM
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 I like it better when it hurts Group: Member Posts: 47 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,730 |
good song! very cool.
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Aug 14 2004, 01:26 PM
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 [p][E][r][F][e][C][T][L][y] [i][N][S][a][N][e] Group: Member Posts: 35 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,206 |
Finally someone smart.. lol.. damn you read my mind. Love the last line too. Great thing u wrote there.
- The Lee |
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Aug 14 2004, 01:32 PM
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 freedom Group: Member Posts: 844 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,358 |
That is some powerful stuff. I love the last line.
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