second change, *dont hurt me* |
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 who again?  Group: Member Posts: 555 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,458  |
i never really know you
you were just another friend but when i got to know you i let my heart unbend i couldnt help past memories that would only make me cry i had to forget my first love and give love another try so i've fallen in love with you and i;ll never let you go i love you more than anyone i just had to let you know and if you ever wonder why i dont know what i';ll say but ill never stop loving you each and every day my feelings for you will never change just know my feelings are true just remember one thing i love you. |
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Aug 8 2004, 06:41 PM
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nice, except... no commas?
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Aug 8 2004, 06:53 PM
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QUOTE(xjjajeengx @ Aug 8 2004, 4:41 PM) nice, except... no commas? you're supposed to say it without taking a breather. - Chinkieeyedpnoi |
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Aug 8 2004, 06:57 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
^Haha, Jose.
Yes, it is nice. 
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Aug 8 2004, 08:41 PM
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wow really like it a lot!
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Aug 8 2004, 10:31 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
wow luv the poem
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Aug 8 2004, 10:40 PM
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who again? Group: Member Posts: 555 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,458 |
this actually happened to me forreal you guys.
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Aug 8 2004, 11:03 PM
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 *aSh* =] Group: Member Posts: 2,075 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,101 |
wow thats reallllly good!!!!! =]
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Aug 8 2004, 11:05 PM
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*gasp*
It's so good. I love how smoothly it flows! *cookie man*! You're so awesome! Andrew! Nice poem! So sweet... =) |
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Aug 8 2004, 11:06 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
its great !!
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