take me away, *my poem for you* |
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 Aug 7 2004, 02:23 PM
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 Got Me?  Group: Member Posts: 34 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 26,430  |
this is my life, there is no getting through
all of my thoughts, revolve around you I cant seem to stray, from the feelings around You helped me stand up, then pushed me back down I feel so alone, so lost without you I cant see strait, or know what to do I miss you so much, it hurts just to breathe this feeling is so strong, I just want to leave As I kneel to the floor, and begin to pray I start to cry, and scream take me away This is too hard for me, the pain is too much I cant stand to stand here, without your touch So without even noticing, I drift off to sleep to never never land, and off so so deep There you will see me, and we meet again the love of my life, will then grab my hand. |
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Aug 7 2004, 02:27 PM
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 Ah, mon Dieu ! Group: Member Posts: 2,274 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,587 |
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Aug 7 2004, 07:56 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
wow i really like it.
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Aug 7 2004, 08:24 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
wow so forlorn... so deep...
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Aug 8 2004, 05:45 PM
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 He ate it, I swear! Group: Member Posts: 659 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,075 |
Aww... I like it. =)
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Aug 8 2004, 06:30 PM
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 ranDUMB Group: Member Posts: 757 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,833 |
I liked it...it wuz so deep...
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