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stupid life and fool of time, more of my poems
black_cloud10
post Aug 7 2004, 10:31 PM
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heh this isn't my best work but *shrug*


Stupid Life

stupid questions
stupid lies
stupid kisses
stupid eyes
stupid love
stupid hate
stupid choices
stupid fate
stupid freedom
stupid captivity
stupid tears
stupid, stupid me


yeah i know its repetative. like i said not my best work lol


Fool of Time

I played the fool today
Tomorrow I will suffer
Tomorrow I will pay
Right now I'm just numb
Right now I'm just dying
Yesterday I wasn't afraid
Yesterday I wasn't crying
But I played the fool today.


as always, comments welcome
 
inthemudhole
post Aug 8 2004, 02:07 AM
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Yay! More from Sara!
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post Aug 8 2004, 03:15 AM
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lol good job! at least this is creative and original, unlike some other BS around here, copy + paste from other ppl's sites...
 
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post Aug 8 2004, 06:34 PM
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Wow, that's great!
 

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