not a story, but..., i'd appreciate it if u read this :) |
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 Yum. =]  Group: Member Posts: 888 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,139  |
Okay, if you've read part of my book Flashbacks then you know I really like to write. So I'm almost done with Flashbacks (it's 215 pages now) so I'm thinking of a new story. I want to know what you'd rather read...(NOTE: both of these plots are basically based on a true story)
Story #1- A highschool girl and her softball coach have an affair with each other. They're convinced that it's love, but trouble starts when somone finds out. That story is going to be 1st person perspective (i.e. I did this, I did that, I am going to, etc.) Story #2- A beautiful 18yr old girl works at a local Hooters in L.A. After she agrees to a date with one of her usual customers, he goes crazy when she dumps him and decides to kidnap her. For days, he keeps her in a cellar- which is dark and damp- torturing her. That story is going to be 3rd person perspective (i.e. She went over there, She thought to herself, She smiled, etc.) So what do you guys think? |
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Aug 5 2004, 06:53 PM
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 mmm....beer.... Group: Member Posts: 752 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,854 |
QUOTE(diezelbabygrl_xoxo @ Aug 5 2004, 1:36 PM) Okay, if you've read part of my book Flashbacks then you know I really like to write. So I'm almost done with Flashbacks (it's 215 pages now) so I'm thinking of a new story. I want to know what you'd rather read...(NOTE: both of these plots are basically based on a true story) Story #1- A highschool girl and her softball coach have an affair with each other. They're convinced that it's love, but trouble starts when somone finds out. That story is going to be 1st person perspective (i.e. I did this, I did that, I am going to, etc.) Story #2- A beautiful 18yr old girl works at a local Hooters in L.A. After she agrees to a date with one of her usual customers, he goes crazy when she dumps him and decides to kidnap her. For days, he keeps her in a cellar- which is dark and damp- torturing her. That story is going to be 3rd person perspective (i.e. She went over there, She thought to herself, She smiled, etc.) So what do you guys think? hmm i'd read both. But anyway, write the first one because that one sounds more funny. |
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Aug 5 2004, 07:36 PM
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 dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
ooo the second one sounds very sadistic and interesting.
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Aug 7 2004, 09:28 PM
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the 2nd one is much more interesting and ther can be a lot of suspence points in it
 if u haf time, cud u post like 2 paragraphs on CB? i'm sure we'd all realli appreciate!
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Aug 8 2004, 05:40 AM
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 Ah, mon Dieu ! Group: Member Posts: 2,274 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,587 |
i would personally read the second story, but they both sound good.
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Aug 8 2004, 06:33 PM
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 ranDUMB Group: Member Posts: 757 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,833 |
The second one sounds more interesting and intense. I like the first one 2 tho.
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Aug 9 2004, 07:09 PM
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Yum. =] Group: Member Posts: 888 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,139 |
QUOTE(F1R3B4T @ Aug 7 2004, 9:28 PM) the 2nd one is much more interesting and ther can be a lot of suspence points in it if u haf time, cud u post like 2 paragraphs on CB? i'm sure we'd all realli appreciate!i'll try, but it might be a while. first i have 2 write a manuscript for flashbacks and send it out 2 little, brown&co. but if i have tha time, i will
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Aug 9 2004, 07:56 PM
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 Hip-Hop's Thai Boxer.. Group: Member Posts: 43 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,679 |
I'd rather read the first one, I think..
Good luck on this, though. |
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Aug 10 2004, 06:37 AM
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 What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
Hm, I voted for the second. It's seems more suspenseful and thrilling..in a sense.
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Aug 13 2004, 01:36 PM
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Yum. =] Group: Member Posts: 888 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,139 |
My current story plot. Read this!!
Okay guys, just forget about this post and go there ^^^. Okay? Thanks
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Aug 16 2004, 11:41 PM
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 original member. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,825 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,460 |
I like story 1 better. The 2nd one reminds me of...erm. Bondage and Rape. Yea.
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Aug 17 2004, 11:00 PM
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 advanced newbie... S2 Group: Member Posts: 3,504 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 752 |
yea, first one would be better. second one... is like a soap opera. actually... it could be like... NC-17
 so im sticking with number 1.
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