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Gone, A Poem
Sa-Chan
post Jul 31 2004, 05:15 PM
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Okay, I really tried to write a happy poem for my suggestions thing. Just couldn't do it. Tried so hard. I came up with something err....that's this...

Gone
By: Savannah


Do you hear me calling you?
Our bodies surrounded by this cursed hue.

My voice has become weak,
As I find those dead in heap after endless heap.

Are you going to find me?
Can we work this out and truly be?

I don't want to live just to die,
I want to know that you are really mine.

So now I'll sit and close my eyes,
Wish it all away; pretend it's one big lie.

I'm so lost now that you're gone,
I'm so alone, and the music ends; taking away song.

I've lost what's so needed in my life,
It's all been cut down with a rusty, jagged knife.

I'm losing all my sense of time,
In the end love and life are one big rhyme.
 

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Sa-Chan   Gone   Jul 31 2004, 05:15 PM
juliar   Love and life are one big rhyme. I love that.I swe...   Jul 31 2004, 05:21 PM
Sa-Chan   QUOTE(juliar @ Jul 31 2004, 5:21 PM)Love and ...   Jul 31 2004, 05:45 PM


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