In This Teenage World, bout teenage life.. |
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 Jul 30 2004, 10:32 AM
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 TheQuietThingsNoOneEverKnows  Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,721  |
In this world of hate and lies
A world full of "hows" and "whys" Divorce becoming not so odd With bonds broken that were sealed by God Children abused at such a young age So much hurt impossible to gauge Politicians cloud our mind With people to vote for of every kind Wars that rage overseas Levels of pain on so many degrees Sex being pressured onto teens Struggling to find out what it all means Discrimination against races Such prejudice against other faces Defining love becomes such an arduous endeavor When people don’t realize love lives forever Drugs work their way into our schools Turning typical teens into desperate fools Teens watch their parents get drunk and stoned Kids feeling so disowned. Being pressured by your peers Pressure soon becoming your worst fear Same sex marriage all over the news Kids this young shouldn’t have to choose Teenage depression everywhere The pain is sometimes too much to bear The suicide numbers continue to climb The sound of death a never ending chime Kids can no longer call their homes a safe place A dream that is too far to chase Future mothers become so torn With helpless children and babies unborn Corruption that spreads throughout our lives Stabbing our friends with countless knives In this teenage world today Teens have to say what they need to say In this teenage world today… |
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Jul 30 2004, 10:34 AM
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 bang bang! my baby shot me down! Group: Member Posts: 754 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,848 |
*round of aplaous* awsome awsome. all very true
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Jul 30 2004, 03:32 PM
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 ohh gosh no Group: Member Posts: 86 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,892 |
*mouth is still open*, again i really like your poems, this one is so true. what has the world come to? oh wel but great job.
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Jul 30 2004, 06:47 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Whoa.
That is GOOD. Very deep.. I like. =-] |
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Jul 31 2004, 09:22 AM
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TheQuietThingsNoOneEverKnows Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,721 |
 thanks. i wrote it bout a month ago.
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Aug 4 2004, 03:21 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
damn thats true. everything that sorrounds us is all there. especially in the big city.
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Aug 5 2004, 10:22 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 80 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,071 |
I really like! Seems like some people just go along with everything that's wrong with us...ex. sex and drugs. It cool to see people stand up for the right things
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Aug 6 2004, 01:45 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
WOW good job!!!! i loved reading it!
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Aug 10 2004, 08:11 PM
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TheQuietThingsNoOneEverKnows Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,721 |
wow, guess i did good on that one then
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Aug 11 2004, 04:19 PM
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 Your love is a razorblade kiss ♥ Group: Member Posts: 1,794 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 9,959 |
woah... all of dat is sooo tru!! *clap clap*
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