"Depression is my Gun" |
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 Jul 29 2004, 06:57 PM
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I hold the shells made of my anticipation...
They are filled with the deadliest weapons, Uncertainty and Confusion. I fill my fear with these wicked shells And take a deep breath. I close my eyes to the world's deceits and lies. I cock the lever on my emptiness And push the trigger on my depression... |
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Jul 29 2004, 07:02 PM
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POWAPOSTA Group: Member Posts: 3,169 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,725 |
i really llove it, but i don't like the last line
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Jul 29 2004, 07:05 PM
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i know...this poem was kinda back when i was really depressed....but im over it now...
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Jul 30 2004, 11:25 AM
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 TheQuietThingsNoOneEverKnows Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,721 |
very vivid. i loved it! reminds me of a poem i was gonna write but never got around to doin it.
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Jul 30 2004, 11:39 AM
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well i personally love it Steven!! i love you! :)
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Jul 30 2004, 12:35 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 29 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,608 |
thanks! i didnt know people would respond to this poem....
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