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All For You, <3
Foolish Heart
post Jul 29 2004, 01:08 AM
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Aww! ^___^
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All For You, by Me

A sparkle of my sorrow
Drips in this shattered memory
These broken promises you made
Made my heart bleed eternally

This love is a never ending story
A maze you have to walk through
Silent screams inside my head
I wish you could just be true

Take my hand and don't let go
Make this moment last forever
Taking in all this pain for you
Why can't we just stay together?

It's a poem I wrote yesterday. It's not really dedicated to anybody but yeah. Sometimes that's how I feel. Comments would be great and appreciated.

-hEaRt <3
 

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Foolish Heart   All For You   Jul 29 2004, 01:08 AM
eboarder2020   I like it... Great job hun   Jul 29 2004, 01:23 AM
Foolish Heart   QUOTE(eboarder2020 @ Jul 29 2004, 1:23 AM)I l...   Jul 29 2004, 01:24 AM
minorxthreat   i like it too. good job   Jul 29 2004, 01:30 AM
EmeraldKnight   I like it too It sounds like it could be a son...   Jul 29 2004, 01:31 AM
Foolish Heart   Aww thanks you guys! ^-^ -hEaRt <3   Jul 29 2004, 01:33 AM
chica777708   good job I liked it   Jul 29 2004, 12:24 PM
Foolish Heart   Thanks ^-^   Jul 30 2004, 05:57 PM


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