Alone, A poem i wrote.... |
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 Jul 26 2004, 04:06 PM
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Alone.
Always Alone. Doesn't get angry. Or sad. Or happy. Just sits there. Maybe thinking. Maybe Lost in another world. But never in reality. Doesn't look. But always sees. Never misses a thing. Full of secrets. Doesn't talk. Doesn't confide. So full of secrets. Made fun of. But doesn't care. People ask. People say. People command. But doesn't answer. Quiet. Desolate. Emotionless. Nothing is ever said. But there's a connection. They criticize. They point. They shout. But never answers. Things happen. Doesn't look. But always sees. Never misses a thing. |
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Jul 26 2004, 04:09 PM
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 Random Rei =) Group: Member Posts: 456 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,490 |
cool poem. you got talent.
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Jul 26 2004, 04:09 PM
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 freedom Group: Member Posts: 844 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,358 |
That's a pretty good poem.
 I like!
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Jul 26 2004, 04:15 PM
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thanx!
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Jul 28 2004, 05:44 AM
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 Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
I get the point of your story, i love it. Good job!
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Jul 28 2004, 09:14 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,989 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,691 |
Nice.
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Jul 28 2004, 01:10 PM
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man...ur very talented. I love this poem because its like me. Im alone. And this poem TOTALLY relates to me......:(
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Jul 28 2004, 09:24 PM
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i thought that i was the only one who felt this way (and of course, i wasnt)...but im glad u guys can relate to my story and im also glad that u like it!
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Jul 28 2004, 09:49 PM
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 Roses are red so r my cheeks! Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,115 |
I love it, it relates to me to I always think I am alone... good job
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Jul 29 2004, 01:32 PM
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Thanx!
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Jul 29 2004, 01:42 PM
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 who again? Group: Member Posts: 555 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,458 |
QUOTE(curi0usbr0wneyes @ Jul 29 2004, 1:32 PM) Thanx! i love this poem, alot of feeling and emotion into it, i as well relate to it. Hope you could write more, i love this type of poetry. aim me tehcookieman <3. |
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Jul 29 2004, 02:30 PM
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 N.CARTER Group: Member Posts: 1,709 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,742 |
Wow. thats a nice poem...nice work =)
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Jul 29 2004, 06:53 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 29 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,608 |
thanx!
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Jul 30 2004, 11:00 AM
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 TheQuietThingsNoOneEverKnows Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,721 |
i likeey!
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Jul 30 2004, 12:11 PM
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 Afflicted: Hurt. Group: Member Posts: 443 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,295 |
I feel with that poem. You are really talented.
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Jul 30 2004, 12:34 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 29 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,608 |
WOW! thanks!
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