Its Crazy How A Girl Can Affect A Guy. |
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 Jul 24 2004, 10:17 AM
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thanks :)
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Jul 24 2004, 11:23 AM
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questions make me blue. Group: Member Posts: 2,608 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,796 |
woah...that would really suck if that really happened.
  good job. you represent all the emotional guys. 
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Jul 24 2004, 08:33 PM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
lol thanks =)
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Jul 24 2004, 09:17 PM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
oh by the way someone here on cb told me that PEOPLE LIKE TO STEAL STUFF AND CLAIM THAT THEY WROTE IT, I MEAN IM NO SUPER WRITER AND MAYBE MY STORY IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR U TO WANNA STEAL IT, BUT IF BY ANYCHANCE YOU USE IT ON A XANGA OR EMAIL IT TO SOMEONE YOU KNOW, PLEASE DO NOT TAKE CREDIT FOR IT AND PLEASE PLEASE MAKE SURE I GET CREDIT FOR IT, i mean its mine and i wrote it, so if you do use it (which i hope you do) just make sure I get credit for it.
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Jul 25 2004, 06:25 PM
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 ¤ i havent been here much ¤ Group: Member Posts: 133 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,018 |
QUOTE(x_angawhomps @ Jul 23 2004, 7:09 PM) WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. -speechless- *claps* Good job, I like it :D whoa @-@ you are very good at least much better than me lol deep yes very deep. |
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Jul 25 2004, 11:14 PM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
thanks for the love :)
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Jul 27 2004, 11:54 PM
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 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
Aww that's so sweet =D *sigh* If only girls didn't play with guys' hearts.. if only guys didn't play with girls' hearts.. lol.. Well anyways sweet story ^_^ It's a short read, yet very sweet. Another hopeless romantic, I presume?
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Jul 28 2004, 12:12 AM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
*nods his head* lol
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Jul 28 2004, 12:42 AM
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 ThePinkPanda Group: Member Posts: 760 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,168 |
Dang.. I hope my brother doesn't end up like that. Because up until the letter, it's so much like him. He won't stop loving her. It pisses me off when I find out about all these guys she dates now. Who treat her like crud and only date her for sex.. My brother would have given her the world, and STILL would. Though they broke up months ago...
That was sad and beautiful at the same time. <-- 98% hopeless romantic |
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Jul 28 2004, 12:57 AM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
hmmmmm
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Jul 28 2004, 12:59 AM
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 easily amused. Group: Member Posts: 189 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,094 |
"He gets scared at the thought that no matter how great you treat a girl she can just walk out on you. i love this line. wow that was really sad
 but i liked it a lot. i'm a hopeless romantic so that really struck home to me. amazing. 
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Jul 28 2004, 01:05 AM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
yeah that was my personal favorite line, cuz thats my biggest fear in love, that no matter how great you treat the person, and no matter how many day dreams u have, the person just for fun, can walk out on u and be like bye, and boom there goes everything, thats my biggest fear in love, so i decided to add it to the story
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Jul 28 2004, 01:07 AM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
oh crap, somone pointed something out, and i gotta thank her, she immed me with this
PhUgIcA: I found a line in your story.. PhUgIcA: it doesnt make sense.. PhUgIcA: 'It hurts him to know that the girl he treated like a queen, is not being treated like a slut.' ok well sorry, its suposed to be, IS NOW(so change the not) lol BEING TREATED LIKE A SLUT, THANKS TO JESSI SO MUCH FOR POINTING THIS OUT! |
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Jul 28 2004, 01:29 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,989 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,691 |
Nice story.
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Jul 28 2004, 09:34 AM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
thanks
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Jul 28 2004, 10:09 PM
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 Roses are red so r my cheeks! Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,115 |
OMG dude great job, I didnt know that guys get emotional like us gurlz do... i think i am going to cry now thx for the writting I will allways remember that
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Jul 28 2004, 11:58 PM
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 Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
That was sad, see these stories always make me cry.
People: ALWAYS TELL THE PERSON YOU LOVE THAT YOU LOVE THEM, because you never know when someone or something will take it away from you. Then you'll regret it if you didn't tell that person that you love them. That's all I have to say. -hEaRt <3 |
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Jul 29 2004, 12:50 AM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
QUOTE(chica777708 @ Jul 28 2004, 10:09 PM) OMG dude great job, I didnt know that guys get emotional like us gurlz do... i think i am going to cry now thx for the writting I will allways remember that Thanks. |
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| *RiC3xBoy* |
Aug 1 2004, 08:05 AM
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wow, what a great story, i like to hear another one from u grapple
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Aug 1 2004, 08:27 AM
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 bang bang! my baby shot me down! Group: Member Posts: 754 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,848 |
aw...
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Aug 1 2004, 05:22 PM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
QUOTE(RiC3xBoy @ Aug 1 2004, 8:05 AM) wow, what a great story, i like to hear another one from u grapple thanksss, yeah i got a new one coming soon, i just dont wanna post too much, because I dont wanna bore everyone with my writing, so yeah eventually ill put a new one. |
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| *NatiMarie* |
Aug 2 2004, 08:18 PM
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That's so sad!
That's such a great story...well written. Great release of emotions. You made it so detailed. I loved it. So talented. Good job. =) |
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Aug 3 2004, 12:11 PM
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Cb's Emotional Writer Group: Member Posts: 166 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,300 |
thanks :)
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Aug 5 2004, 12:18 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,553 |
dayum mayn.. thats deep like shit.. sounds almost JUST like wuts happenin to me right now.. except tha part where i die...ya well luv sucks...
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Aug 5 2004, 12:41 AM
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 advanced newbie... S2 Group: Member Posts: 3,504 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 752 |
WOW nice story
this would be the perfect topic if... you'd stop double posting. DONT DOUBLE POST!! its bad bad badbut seriulsy, very touching story. but no double posting! if you wanna double post, edit out ur first post.
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