Lost and oblivious, another poem |
 Jul 16 2004, 07:17 PM
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 Wendy Clear  Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,961  |
I’m so lost and oblivious
To everything in sight The darkness surrounds me I cannot find the light My world is ending Finally it’s the end I’m not scared of death Only dying without a friend The stars in heaven are fading Their light is going out Crashing into the sea This is what pain is all about Something so beautiful Has now rotted away Life was once so precious Now nothing can hold sway The future is now apparent It’s time to say goodbye I didn’t know why this had to end But now I finally know why |
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WendyLynn182 Lost and oblivious Jul 16 2004, 07:17 PM
_WillSkate4Shoes I really like this poem. Ive read some of your oth... Jul 17 2004, 02:21 AM islandkiss oo.. it's nicely written. Jul 17 2004, 10:41 AM WendyLynn182 Thanks for your comments! Jul 19 2004, 11:05 PM winks03 this is really good!! i write poems too an... Jul 20 2004, 01:54 AM seriouslynikki wow! VEry nice Jul 28 2004, 01:13 PM
chica777708 good job beats my poem ok good job bye Jul 28 2004, 09:56 PM  |
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