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Dreams, Poem...I actually like this one...
Sa-Chan
post Jul 16 2004, 11:28 PM
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Dreams
By: Savannah
Dedicated To: My Boyfriend
Written: 11:27 PM, July 16, 2004


I'm dreaming of you now,
In our own private land we stand.
If I could, I would steal away your tears,
I would fight back all your fears.
Don't get me wrong,
I know we haven't known eachother all that long.
I'd love to be your hero,
Reduce your pain to zero.
In my dream I do.
In my dreams I slaughter what's between us,
No, what I feel for you, it's not mere lust.
You are my heart and soul,
With my life, I would pay the toll.
Everyone around us,
They all said I couldn't love you.
But that was just a lie,
Because I couldn't love you more,
Even if I tried.
For you I'd kill myself,
I'd bathe in my own blood,
I'd slit these two damned wrists,
And die thinking of your kiss.
For you I'd be insane,
I'd wish away the world,
I'd make everything between you and me vanish,
Make it all become inane.
I'd love to hold you close to me,
Revel in my love for you,
Fantasize of all the things that we could be,
I'd stay by your side until my life passes me by.
Simply because I can,
Because you see me the way I am,
I'm dreaming of you now, eternally...
 

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Sa-Chan   Dreams   Jul 16 2004, 11:28 PM
LiNHy POO   oo wow!!! a very nice poem!!...   Jul 16 2004, 11:47 PM
islandkiss   aww. I really like it.   Jul 17 2004, 10:45 AM
vietspirit   wut a kool poem! i luv it! ^^   Jul 17 2004, 11:28 AM
airam   i really like it, but i dont think the last line f...   Jul 17 2004, 04:06 PM
Sa-Chan   QUOTE(airam @ Jul 17 2004, 4:06 PM)i really l...   Jul 17 2004, 05:28 PM
crazeegirl411   Savannah! It's beautiful! I'm su...   Jul 18 2004, 05:45 AM
Sa-Chan   QUOTE(crazeegirl411 @ Jul 18 2004, 5:45 AM)Sa...   Jul 18 2004, 11:17 AM
JlIaTMK   nice nice.... its really hard to make a poem that ...   Jul 18 2004, 01:38 PM


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