Sad Poem++, Maybe you can relate?.. Options

[britagetndagee]

-Walking away-

Her essence of beauty bewilders what portrays in her loneliness.
Self annihilating temptations seek a way out of misfortune.
Alone she cries.
Capturing the dangers of the silver lining.
Such hates towards oneself only brings fatal consequences.
She addles along with her dying self beauty.
Fighting for a true existence,
she truly is the only thing keeping her alive.
As time bypasses, selfless aggressions,
and unclaimed identities fight for hope.
An uncontrollable rage puts her in a position
where choices are limited to self inflected pain.
Dreams of dissatisfaction, cleanse her sense of being unwanted.
They always told her she needed help, but never took the time.
She is I, and I despise me.. For ignoring the truth.

What do you think? ... Im trying so hard to become a good writer.

[_WillSkate4Shoes]

I really liked that. I can relate what you mean. But yes your a good writer. I really dont have any advice but just keep writing.. its good for the soul.=]

[ghjgfkgfk]

i like it. i like the way it flows together.

btw, what's that in our avatar?