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i love you, a poem
smallymollyLINDA
post Jul 14 2004, 10:18 PM
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I love you I love you,
I love you so well,
if I had a skunk
I would give you a smell.
If I were a dog
I would give you a bite.
If I were a witch
I would give you a fright.

If I were a bathtub
I'd give you a splash.
If I were a fungus
I'd give you a rash.

I love you so much
that I won't tell a lie,
I promise we'll marry
the day that I die.



throb.gif Linda
 
Caitlin
post Jul 14 2004, 10:20 PM
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woah very creative.. i like it ;P good job
 
LiNHy POO
post Jul 15 2004, 12:43 AM
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sooo cute!!! rhymes nicely!! happy.gif
 
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post Jul 15 2004, 01:03 AM
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QUOTE(smallymollyLINDA @ Jul 14 2004, 11:18 PM)
I love you so much
that I won't tell a lie,
I promise we'll marry
the day that I die.

^^ That is so deep. cry.gif
 
kraziegrl
post Jul 15 2004, 01:42 AM
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QUOTE(smallymollyLINDA @ Jul 14 2004, 10:18 PM)
I promise we'll marry
the day that I die.



throb.gif Linda

i like this poem happy.gif but.. im a little confused on soemthing. why is she/he going to marry someone the day that they die?
 
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post Jul 15 2004, 01:24 PM
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i like that..very cute!
 
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post Jul 15 2004, 11:12 PM
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ohh gosh no
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That was really cute! hehe and creative! i like it!
 
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post Jul 16 2004, 10:35 AM
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thats a great poem... It flows well and is very emotional... Good JOb
 

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