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 Jun 30 2004, 07:01 PM
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 Yeter Poon  Group: Member Posts: 316 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 495  |
I heard something vaguely similar but I wrote this one.
There was this couple. And they fell greatly in love the first day they laid eyes on each other. A couple of weeks before their wedding date, they went to a fortuneteller and sought their future. The fortuneteller warned them not to get married for their relationship will not last. The bond the two lovers had made was so strong that they ignored what the teller for warned. Two months after the marriage the husband died of a car accident. And a week later, the wife committed suicide due to the grief. At the scene of the suicide the wife left a note to the fortuneteller saying, “You believed that our love will be cut short due to his departure of this world, but I will follow him to the heavens.” Honestly, what a dumb wife. If I was the husband, I'd like my wife to live a happy life on earth. And she'd most likely go to hell for commiting suicide. Selfish girl... 
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Jun 30 2004, 07:02 PM
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Aww that's sweet...
Cliche, but sweet =) |
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Jun 30 2004, 07:02 PM
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Senior Member. Group: Member Posts: 3,619 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,940 |
QUOTE(NaTiMaRiE @ Jun 30 2004, 8:02 PM) Aww that's sweet... Cliche, but sweet =) Took it out from my mouth. 
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Jun 30 2004, 07:02 PM
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 advanced newbie... S2 Group: Member Posts: 3,504 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 752 |
aww well i read this somewhere before. this belongs in writing, not lounge, so moving it.
 anyways, WHAT?!??! "너무 뜨거운" wow... must be a bit on the... self-confident side  jkjk.
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Jun 30 2004, 07:21 PM
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 samurai champloo! Group: Member Posts: 748 Joined: Dec 2003 Member No: 2 |
omg peter that was so sweet
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Jun 30 2004, 07:26 PM
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im' edible Group: Member Posts: 1,529 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,022 |
peter will you marry me. anyways that would sweet..it melted me.
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Jul 2 2004, 02:22 PM
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QUOTE(pyoon @ Jun 30 2004, 7:01 PM) Honestly, what a dumb wife. If I was the husband, I'd like my wife to live a happy life on earth. And she'd most likely go to hell for commiting suicide. Selfish girl... haha, your funny. what sweet people we have at CB here. write more, melt more girls hearts! |
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Jul 4 2004, 11:29 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,795 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,421 |
That was realli sweet.. it sounded exactly like the plot for this one movie.. erm.. i forget what its called, but that's exactly what happened.. except that the husband and wife were soulmates or something, so the husband went to hell and rescued her
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Jul 4 2004, 11:39 PM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
That would be a Greek myth... Orpheus I believe. I forgot the girl's name. Search for it. Of course, Greek myths never end happily. Orpheus is weak, turns back to look at hell one last time, and is turned into stone forever. Puny mortals!
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Jul 5 2004, 01:29 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,795 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,421 |
QUOTE That would be a Greek myth... Orpheus I believe. I forgot the girl's name. Search for it. Of course, Greek myths never end happily. Orpheus is weak, turns back to look at hell one last time, and is turned into stone forever. Puny mortals! Well the myth is similar, but not that much |
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Jul 5 2004, 02:31 PM
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 ilikeyouSofreakingmuch. Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643 |
That's pretty sweet .. but weird .. o.O
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Jul 7 2004, 02:08 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
lOL!! and u wrote that... and u say it's pretty dumb cause she is selfish haha^^;; ur funny peter haha newais hmm... i dont believe in fortunetellers... cause they are like evil spirit wannabes...so yeah hehe but wow they actually die haha
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Jul 7 2004, 03:36 PM
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awwss...lol
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Jul 7 2004, 05:07 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
i like "girl found dead" better. hehe
*SHAMELESS SELF-PROMOTIOM* |
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Jul 7 2004, 08:44 PM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
QUOTE i like "girl found dead" better. hehe *SHAMELESS SELF-PROMOTIOM* ahahaha xDDD that story was relle sad -___-;; |
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Jul 8 2004, 03:22 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,102 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,162 |
It was sad, yes, but like Natimarie said, very cliche.
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