I NEED AN HONEST PERSON......, to read this |
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 Jul 2 2004, 11:12 PM
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 soyoungy  Group: Member Posts: 356 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,342  |
ill do it... but send it like 4 daiz later though... itz_soyoungy@hotmail.com
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Jul 3 2004, 08:26 AM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
heaven_sent179@yahoo.com
sweet_catastrophe_xD@hotmail.com |
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Jul 3 2004, 03:11 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,032 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,398 |
so wat happens...wen yoohs are done can i read da rest? its good
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Jul 3 2004, 03:20 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
That was a really good story.
 Nice job! |
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Jul 3 2004, 03:28 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 271 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,766 |
brklynzlildevil@yahoo.com
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Jul 3 2004, 03:41 PM
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to hell with you Group: Member Posts: 2,547 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,506 |
i read it. its pretty goood but there are so bad things to it. its a little too choppy. make the sentences flow better.
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Jul 3 2004, 04:48 PM
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 Peter aka Peetah =) Group: Member Posts: 198 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,046 |
mememe! petermai3000@hotmail.com
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Jul 3 2004, 04:53 PM
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 pixel hybrid Group: Member Posts: 6,410 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,081 |
Haha, I was just wandering around and I see this and I look at how many pages it has.. and think, "Wow... so many honest people, huh?" Haha. I don't check my email anymore. *shrugs*
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Jul 3 2004, 05:25 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 7 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,655 |
i wanna read, x__kristina@hotmail.com
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Jul 3 2004, 06:20 PM
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 Yum. =] Group: Member Posts: 888 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,139 |
QUOTE i read it. its pretty goood but there are so bad things to it. its a little too choppy. make the sentences flow better. thanks! that helped me a lot
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Jul 5 2004, 04:04 AM
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minties Group: Member Posts: 118 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,390 |
my summer is so uneventful. jenzwang@hotmail.com
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Jul 6 2004, 08:59 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
ifyoonlyknew@yahoo.com send it over :D
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Jul 6 2004, 09:07 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 164 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,737 |
i write a lot of stories too and when i show them to friends it takes them eternity to read, and once they give it back they're like "oh it was great"
email me at x_aznlady_x@yahoo.com and ill read it and crtique it
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Jul 6 2004, 09:12 PM
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 lookitskait Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,930 |
i wanna read it!! white_girl53@hotmail.com
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Jul 6 2004, 09:19 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,247 |
Here, send it to me:
EnErGiZeRbUnNi83@aol.com |
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Jul 6 2004, 09:23 PM
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 Alisha Group: Member Posts: 2,341 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,880 |
ya i'll read it inspyrie@msn.com
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Jul 6 2004, 09:30 PM
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 ooo la la Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,853 |
all these replys saying it was good.. i wanna read!!!
xbittersweetbabyx@yahoo.com |
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Jul 7 2004, 10:20 AM
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uhhmmm...HEY!!!! Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,143 |
sure email me too : rosewhite1617@yahoo.com
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Jul 7 2004, 11:44 AM
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Yum. =] Group: Member Posts: 888 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,139 |
OKAY GUYS. SINCE THERE ARE A LOT OF HONEST PEOPLE, IF U POST AFTER ME YOU MIGHT NOT RECIEVE THE STORY BECAUSE I AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON IT.
THANK YOU
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Jul 7 2004, 11:48 AM
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 Ewww.. I smell a Loser!! *_* Group: Member Posts: 115 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,190 |
what's the story about?? count me it.. siyutiayee@hotmail.com
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Jul 7 2004, 12:07 PM
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 Call me Emily <33. Group: Member Posts: 713 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,579 |
i'll read it--
H4w3s@aol.com |
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Jul 7 2004, 01:35 PM
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lookitskait Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,930 |
why don't you just post it on here.. and then keep adding when you get more finished?! i think its really good.. is this a true story?! i think it would make a great soap opera!!
will you send meeh the rest when you finish it up.. please please i wanna kno the ending!! |
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Jul 7 2004, 02:08 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
wow thats long but ill read it to the emil is in my profile
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Jul 7 2004, 08:52 PM
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 > aLwAyS bE uR SeLf < Group: Member Posts: 179 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,704 |
What special 'bout da story, hm....... ok i want read it, i think its nice coz all people want to read so i want....
I will read it mine is : crazy_blue23@hotmail.com |
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Jul 7 2004, 09:33 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 279 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,406 |
oohhh i wana read it lol
ooh_babi@hotmail.com |
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