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 Apr 18 2010, 04:44 PM
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 Funride.org  Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299  |
Check it out! Its for my design site Funride.org I'm bringing back.
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Apr 18 2010, 05:19 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
It looks okay, but I don't like how Ashlee's hair and jacket are tinted green. I think you could choose a better font for the text.
Also, Internet Explorer? Seriously? You should switch over to Mozilla Firefox or Google Chrome; IE is such a crappy browser. |
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Apr 18 2010, 05:27 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
My mom gets pissed when I do that. =\
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Apr 18 2010, 05:32 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,938 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 667,832 |
I dont like the green funride banner
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Apr 18 2010, 06:05 PM
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Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
QUOTE(funride @ Apr 18 2010, 06:27 PM)  My mom gets pissed when I do that. =\ Why? It's not like you're downloading harmful software, and they're far better than IE is. Make your own account if you share a computer with her and you can download whatever software you want. |
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Apr 18 2010, 06:14 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
I will do that, she is just electronically declined and thinks everything is dangerous.
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Apr 18 2010, 06:23 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
i would change up the background. The colours match but just they way the two patterns are don't really...if that makes sense.
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Apr 18 2010, 06:25 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
No that doesnt really make sense. haha
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Apr 18 2010, 07:39 PM
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 /人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
I would say you lost it, but I honestly don't remember you ever having it.
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Apr 18 2010, 08:03 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
^^Well thanks.
And honestly, thats the kind of stuff that normal people like. Before I closed funride I made stuff like this and got a bunch of orders, not everyone likes it all formal and neat and no type of error whatsoever. This post has been edited by Cristy: Apr 18 2010, 08:08 PM
Reason for edit: Merged double posts. - Cristy
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Apr 18 2010, 09:08 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,063 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 670,288 |
You never did have it.
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Apr 18 2010, 09:20 PM
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 Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
Your old stuff was a lot better...
The background is icky quality and I just don't feel like it suits the image. The green tint makes her look a little weird The text... the text is just horrible! Find a better font and learn how to blend it in so it doesn't look it was simply plastered on. People like the really icky stuff because they think that it's one of the best things you can do. They're just ignoring all the other possibilities that you can do with your program. |
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Apr 19 2010, 03:49 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Definitely could use some work on the banner, and especially the text - it's way too plain. Don't go overboard though. Also, I wouldn't choose such a strong gradient for the background, tone it down a bit.
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Apr 19 2010, 05:38 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
I see where you're trying to go with this layout style. I see it work on some sites and it looks just amazingly gorgeous. However, this layout isn't a good example.. Like everyone said, the green gradient is too bright. If you're going to keep a gradient background, I suggest toning down the green to a more soft green. For the banner, I think you could get rid of the text boxes. They look too bulky, unless you try to make them a bit more thin and less wide. You could possibly replace the text boxes with overlapping text to have that text overlapping style. If you look at some sites like outspoken-kate, swimchick, 99mockingbirds, they will provide you with a much broader vision of designing a layout. Outspoken-kate has a own layout tutorial making page, I believe. I think this layout has some potential, but you just need to fix things up a lot.
Oh, and about the browser problem. Have you tried telling your mom how vulnerable IE is compared to other browsers? Have you showed her different browsers on the computer or on another computer and persuade her to switch to other browsers because of the better user interface or the graphic interface? You could try Firefox, Opera, Google Chrome, or Safari. Really, it's much better. |
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Apr 23 2010, 10:25 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
I switched to firefox.
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Apr 24 2010, 01:29 AM
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Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
QUOTE(funride @ Apr 23 2010, 11:25 PM) I switched to firefox. Good. Now, did you edit your layout? |
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Apr 24 2010, 08:31 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Too much f*cking green. That shit clashes, like really f*cking bad. Nothing seems to really flow, to be honest.
And people like this kind of shit because it's all they can f*cking afford. Or they have some really f*cking bad-eyesight. For a more censored, user-friendly version of this post, please press 1. |
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Apr 24 2010, 09:53 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
No Cristy, I gave up on this layout. Im gonna take a break from making stuff and just work on blending, different styles, texture implements. Hopefully get better.
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Apr 25 2010, 01:11 AM
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Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
QUOTE(funride @ Apr 24 2010, 10:53 PM) No Cristy, I gave up on this layout. Im gonna take a break from making stuff and just work on blending, different styles, texture implements. Hopefully get better. Should I close this for now? |
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Apr 25 2010, 04:18 AM
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 ٩(●̮̮̃•̃)۶ Group: Official Member Posts: 1,403 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,173 |
QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Apr 24 2010, 06:31 PM) Too much f*cking green. That shit clashes, like really f*cking bad. Nothing seems to really flow, to be honest. And people like this kind of shit because it's all they can f*cking afford. Or they have some really f*cking bad-eyesight. For a more censored, user-friendly version of this post, please press 1. Wtf?? Way to jump on the bashing bandwagon. Your stuff isn't that much better... |
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Apr 26 2010, 02:14 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 292 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 545,047 |
The green is wayyyy to much. The toxic waste green is just icky, especially with black. Other than the color it looks good, but maybe try a softer font. It looks kind of blocky and pixely.
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