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My once ago friend, A poem that I wrote
CandyPop
post Feb 20 2010, 10:39 AM
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This is a poem that I wrote for Creative Writing I, last semester. It is going to get published in this laureate magazine at my school.

My Once Ago Friend

As I picked up a lonely flower from the earth
I thoughtfully pulled a delicate petal
As I was doing so, I reminisced over you
My once ago friend who vanished
With no farewell leaving me behind
To sink to drown in my memories
Of your existence
My once ago friend, I thought of you
As if you were greater than a field of gold
I would swim in the deepest ocean
To keep the closeness between us
My once ago friend I smiled for you
Even though you cared for me weakly
In return for my kindness to you
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As I came back to reality
The wind began to blow swiftly
Causing my delicate petal to drift away
Leaving me behind as I watched it
Move on neglecting the past
I now realized that I should do the same
 

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CandyPop   My once ago friend   Feb 20 2010, 10:39 AM
Uso   This is really nice   Feb 20 2010, 12:44 PM
CandyPop   QUOTE(Uso @ Feb 20 2010, 12:44 PM) This i...   Feb 20 2010, 03:30 PM
Paladin   this is not one of those poems you say is good jus...   Feb 24 2010, 01:34 AM
CandyPop   QUOTE(Paladin @ Feb 24 2010, 01:34 AM) th...   Feb 24 2010, 03:06 PM
Ekay   QUOTE(Paladin @ Feb 23 2010, 10:34 PM) th...   Feb 28 2010, 12:19 AM
CandyPop   Thanks! =D   Feb 28 2010, 08:57 AM
MrStrife   I really like this poem!! I just made one ...   Mar 31 2010, 05:29 PM


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