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datass
post Feb 3 2010, 09:52 AM
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well, i made a yearbook page. this is about A3 size. double page.

original is 300dpi and a huge ass file. 26.8mb or something. uhhh.

simply showcasing. its on its way to be published so i can't change anything now. though i wish i made it less dark. a few things i wish i could touch up but the deadline came sooner than i thought ):

anyway here it is.

 
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post Feb 3 2010, 01:42 PM
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looks very cute and i see you put a lot of effort into it. sucks that you can't fix things, but i'm gonna show some minor mistakes anyways:

The part where it shows EUNICE LAU looks like it wasn't blended in cause of the line that meets with part of jasmine's hands. another thing is EUNICE's speech bubble. the little white cartoons are kinda blocking off the part where the speech bubble tail is since the other speech bubbles tails aren't blocked off ( i just found it a bit annoying, but it isn't that much of a problem. )


and i agree with it being a bit brighter. but on the positive side, you can tell them that the darkness of you guys faces adds mystery to it. haha
 
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post Feb 3 2010, 03:38 PM
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How many pictures of you are on the spread?
 
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post Feb 3 2010, 05:15 PM
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^umm.. lol i dont know about less than 16. go count. im on the far left.

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The part where it shows EUNICE LAU looks like it wasn't blended in cause of the line that meets with part of jasmine's hands.

and i agree with it being a bit brighter. but on the positive side, you can tell them that the darkness of you guys faces adds mystery to it. haha

the part between eunice and jasmine kind of bothered me too. but there sort of is this "solution", since this was a 2 page design, it's supposed to fold in in the middle anyway. it's a thick yearbook. it'll sort of 'hide' it. i know its not really a solution but i thought if i blended it in it wouldnt look too nice, i've tried.
 

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