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 Jan 22 2010, 07:47 AM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 214 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 742,635  |
Well, this is my second try at this, it's been like 4 months since i last try and make a layout, and it was no good... so this is my second try, and in my opinion I don't like this one ether, i didn't use no brushes or nothing... guess I don't know what to put on it... i try and focus on a clean layout cause i love how clean layouts look... so if this has any hope of making the layout look better, then whatever it is now, please help me :)
maybe some kind of texture? or brushes? I tried to put a grunge brush on it (a splatter) but it didn't look right, and i have no ideas. maybe just redo the whole thing with the same idea in it? hm? i don't know but please help me p.s, myspace layout. |
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Jan 22 2010, 11:48 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
I do not like the text you used for "Eye Candy". Looks a bit tacky..tbh. And why are some of the navigation text like "Links" are bigger compared to the other ones..?
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Jan 22 2010, 09:43 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 214 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 742,635 |
hm idk ill make em all the same size
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Jan 24 2010, 01:04 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
^Beenly was just trying to help. I dk why you got bothered by his suggestion
 Anyways, I agree with what he said. I like the concept but the font choices could have been better and the "Bio" and "Links" boxes look randomly placed there. Try and organize your layout better. |
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Jan 28 2010, 09:18 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 214 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 742,635 |
oh i didnt get bothered!
 i think so too. recommend a font choice? |
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Jan 28 2010, 09:41 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
I agree with Natalia about trying to organize the layout better. Also, I think the periods after "Bio" are unnecessary.
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Jan 28 2010, 10:58 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 214 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 742,635 |
QUOTE(Cristy @ Jan 28 2010, 09:41 PM)  I agree with Natalia about trying to organize the layout better. Also, I think the periods after "Bio" are unnecessary. Oh thanks i didn't even realized i did that..... 
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Jan 29 2010, 04:28 AM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Fonts are a little too big for my taste, and I think it would look better if you aligned your boxes evenly, in columns and rows. Just an opinion.
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Jan 29 2010, 07:31 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 214 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 742,635 |
Your right!!! ill do that!
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