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Myspace Layouts!, Check them out. ;)
ZeT0
post Dec 10 2009, 03:21 AM
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It'd be great if someone could drop me some feedback on some of my more recent layout designs.

http://www.myspace.com/handofmercy
http://www.myspace.com/thiscityignites
http://www.myspace.com/thesecitysecrets
http://www.myspace.com/redbackphotography
http://www.myspace.com/adeadsilenceband
http://www.myspace.com/vanstormrock

I know there's a few, and I don't expect you to look at them all, but it'd be great if you could send me some criticize on one or two. :)
Thanks!

This post has been edited by Cristy: Dec 12 2009, 03:30 PM
Reason for edit: Made the links clickable for convenience. - Cristy
 
manny-the-dino
post Dec 10 2009, 06:14 PM
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1) The font you used for the band's name in the banner is too busy. I also think you went a bit overboard with the textures and the transition from white to black to white to black isn't so smooth. Like it's so sudden, you know? Everything else seems fine though. The font you used for the headers is cute lol.

2) Again, the textures are too much. You used them in the background but then you use them in banner, around the default image, music, and contact info. Only use it in one place. Besides that, it looks good. I like the font you used on the headers... again haha.

3) I like this one a lot. I love all the shades of teal you used. But what I find the coolest is as you scroll down, the layout gets dark. Like if you were going deeper into the ocean. Nice thumbsup.gif

4) Looks nice. The only thing that bothers me is that in the FAQ section, there isn't spacing between the questions so it looks very cluttered. But it's nice and simple.

5) Honestly, I don't get that beige brush you used in the banner and behind the music player; seems random and doesn't really fit your theme. It also bugs me that the brush goes over the band members' faces. Other than that, it's okay.

6) I find it weird how the top of the image in the banner can be seen. I think it should be blended into somehow with the text or be faded. Not sure about the textures here, also. _unsure.gif Especially because it makes the third band member's image dark, where the tweets are.


Overall, don't use as many textures.
 
ZeT0
post Dec 12 2009, 02:09 AM
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5) Honestly, I don't get that beige brush you used in the banner and behind the music player; seems random and doesn't really fit your theme. It also bugs me that the brush goes over the band members' faces. Other than that, it's okay.


With the brush, i'm not too sure if you're talking about the logo or not ahaha.
They're a metal band, they always have weird logos.
But that's for all your criticism!
Get more people to do it! :) ahahaha.
Thanks.
 

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