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 Dec 5 2009, 09:43 PM
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This is a piece that Im doing for a friend.
The only thing that seems off to me is the type. Version one  Revised Version 
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Dec 5 2009, 10:40 PM
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 i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
Typo = ba~d. It's the fonts. They're so...childish(?) against the serenity of the moons/planets/rock thingies. And that glow definitely needs to be softened.
Also, I'm not really sure about that bottom corner of bright cheery pastels. Good start, I guess. 
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Dec 5 2009, 11:20 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 73 Joined: Dec 2009 Member No: 754,485 |
Yeah the type is the thing that has been bothering me the most.
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Dec 6 2009, 02:31 AM
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title should be bigger then their names, or the title should go beneath their names
Looks good other then the text. Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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