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 Nov 21 2009, 11:51 PM
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I made this as the catalog cover for my FIDM entrance project. I'm not done but I need help - what should I add or do to it to make it better? Thanks.
 
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Nov 23 2009, 01:02 AM
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I love the idea. It's very cute. However I think you went overboard with the patterns and such. Tone those down. Also I see why you'd put "dance" in the girl's silhouette but it doesn't really go with the theme. Perhaps using a different font and font color would tie it all together. But like I said, I love the idea :) |
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Nov 23 2009, 07:11 PM
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You simply have to much going on tone it down. The colors on the chick are too bright also. You have a lot of empty space on the top right.
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Nov 23 2009, 07:22 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
What Natalia (manny-the-dino) said about the patterns. If you're going to put text inside the silhouette of the girl, tone down the opacity of the text. Also not a fan of the font you chose for "discover the dancer within" - it doesn't match with the rest of your text. Pretty cute though.
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Nov 24 2009, 04:28 AM
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I think it's a bit overdone in general. What they^ said and the fonts don't really seem to work well together.
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