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New Myspace Layout - Loudsur13 V8.0
Loudsur13
post Oct 12 2009, 03:42 PM
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Just Recently Published It, Its All Flash & PHP, Every Graphic Done In Photoshop & Swift 3D.
Check It Out & Tell Me What You Think.
Loudsur13 v8.0
 
jiyong
post Oct 12 2009, 08:33 PM
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Navigation is off.

Also, leaves + stripes + pawprints + floral elements + bricks + graffiti-type font...

Clashes a little.

I like the video idea.

Edit: nvm about the navigation, it fixed itself after I refreshed a few times. But it's still a different colour than the rest of the bar, on my screen.
 
emberfly
post Oct 12 2009, 08:56 PM
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QUOTE(elletricity @ Oct 12 2009, 08:33 PM) *


Thank you for the screenshot. I was just about to say "It looks just like the default."

I hate this new feature Myspace added. geyyyy.


• The dude's eye looks weird. Why is it so blue?
• The image below the dude has beautiful greens and that yellowy color of the bricks. Why did you choose black and white as your color scheme?
• I'm not sure how cool it is to have illegal drugs all over your layout.
• How do the paw prints tie in?
• Can't really read the text. "LoudSuri3"? "He you nint a do6 you nint shit"?
 
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post Oct 12 2009, 09:36 PM
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The thing that looks off to me the most are the weed plants next to the bags, they just stick out a lot. Also, the dog prints are a little eh.

I like how everything loads. Looks good to me.
 
Loudsur13
post Oct 12 2009, 10:21 PM
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QUOTE(elletricity @ Oct 12 2009, 06:33 PM) *


Navigation is off.

Also, leaves + stripes + pawprints + floral elements + bricks + graffiti-type font...

Clashes a little.

I like the video idea.

Edit: nvm about the navigation, it fixed itself after I refreshed a few times. But it's still a different colour than the rest of the bar, on my screen.


must be the browser, i made it compatible with IE & FF, havent tested on others

QUOTE(emberfly @ Oct 12 2009, 06:56 PM) *
Thank you for the screenshot. I was just about to say "It looks just like the default."

I hate this new feature Myspace added. geyyyy.
• The dude's eye looks weird. Why is it so blue?
• The image below the dude has beautiful greens and that yellowy color of the bricks. Why did you choose black and white as your color scheme?
• I'm not sure how cool it is to have illegal drugs all over your layout.
• How do the paw prints tie in?
• Can't really read the text. "LoudSuri3"? "He you nint a do6 you nint shit"?


It says Loudsur13, like my URL & name and under that it says "If You Aint A D.O.G You Aint Shit, i gus the fonts a bit hard to read

BTW theres more than that 1 page, just hover over the text on the bottom that says "Bitches Whatever, Dogz Forever", and it rollovers into the menu
Reason for edit: Please edit your posts instead of triple posting. - Gabrielle (Elletricity)
 
synatribe
post Oct 12 2009, 10:59 PM
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is this just a regular profile or an artist profile? I couldnt (and didnt) want to read anything because of the undesirable font, I thought it was a myspace profile advocating pot or something. The focus on pot overwhelms the entire profile, just put couple marijuana leaves here and there but not everywhere :]
 
manny-the-dino
post Oct 13 2009, 04:15 PM
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I like the flash. Looks really cool but...
QUOTE(elletricity @ Oct 12 2009, 06:33 PM) *
Also, leaves + stripes + pawprints + floral elements + bricks + graffiti-type font...

Clashes a little.



Other than that, I'd make the font in your bio bigger because I had to squint my eyes to read it. Came out nice. thumbsup.gif
 
emberfly
post Oct 13 2009, 04:39 PM
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QUOTE(synatribe @ Oct 12 2009, 10:59 PM) *
I thought it was a myspace profile advocating pot or something. The focus on pot overwhelms the entire profile, just put couple marijuana leaves here and there but not everywhere :]


Or none at all works, too! biggrin.gif
 
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post Oct 13 2009, 04:48 PM
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You're Only Supposed To Capitalize The First Word In Every Sentence.

Anyway, the layout itself is well made. Animations are nice and fluid, everything loads quickly, nothing seems out of place as a result of poor coding.
Your entire layout focuses more on pot than on anything else. I'm not against smoking weed or anything, but I don't think you should plaster it all over the place because it makes you look edgy and cool or whatever. Pawprints have nothing to do with pot, stripes, floral patterns, or graffiti text, but I understand what your idea in putting it there was. I think it was a bad idea.
 
emberfly
post Oct 13 2009, 04:50 PM
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I still don't understand his eye.
 
Loudsur13
post Oct 20 2009, 04:41 PM
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QUOTE(emberfly @ Oct 13 2009, 02:50 PM) *
I still don't understand his eye.


well its like that because I'm gonna make it change colors in flash, more noticeable when its a brighter color
 
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post Oct 20 2009, 05:04 PM
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QUOTE(Buttsex @ Oct 13 2009, 05:48 PM) *
You're Only Supposed To Capitalize The First Word In Every Sentence, Unless There's A Language, Title, Or Name In The Sentence.

 
Firiath
post Oct 23 2009, 04:50 AM
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The edges are a little choppy and it's really... square like at the bottom. Change the fonts - they're really hard to read and if no one can read them there's no point to the text being there.
 

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