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 Sep 22 2009, 10:10 AM
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 Creative Developer  Group: Member Posts: 116 Joined: Jan 2009 Member No: 712,281  |
Im about to launch my own freelance myspace design site, here is my page as of now.
I want to keep it simple and short. any thoughts? |
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Sep 22 2009, 10:42 AM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Looks pretty good. I'd darken the text for Luke Smith, but that's a minor detail. Also remember to capitalize "Winston-Salem" and "Myspace".
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Sep 22 2009, 10:50 AM
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 (′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
one thing that seems to be a minor detail, but you have to notice that the texture you used for the big blue box is a bit blurry. sharpen it? find a bigger res? don't know..
and its monotone... but that works well. right now i cant imagine what other color would fit well there. i like it. pretty much to the point and all you gotta see. |
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Sep 22 2009, 03:24 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I agree with Gabrielle because everything does look monotone. Kind of comes off as boring, imo. But that's just a personal preference. Other than that, it's nice.
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Sep 22 2009, 09:46 PM
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 AIDS at RAVES. Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878 |
creative arrangement and myspace design line looks squished and out of place, I would put some line height ;]
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